[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5750-bis-06

2018-06-14 Thread Ines Robles
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5750-bis-??
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2018-06-14
IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-27
IESG Telechat date: 2018-06-21

Summary:

This document specifies conventions for X.509 certificate usage by
Secure/Multipurpose Internet Mail Extensions (S/MIME) v4.0 agents. This
document obsoletes RFC 5750.

I believe the draft is technically good. This document is well written and
clear to understand. The minor issues of version 05 were addressed in version
06.

Major issues: No major issues found.

Minor issues: No minor issues found.

Nits/editorial comments:  idnits tool shows: 4 errors (**), 0 flaws (~~), 7
warnings (==), 12 comments (--).
https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5750-bis-06.txt

Thanks!

Ines.

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[Gen-art] Review Assignments

2018-06-14 Thread Jean Mahoney
Hi all,

The following reviewers have assignments:

For telechat 2018-06-21

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Elwyn Davies   Telechat  2018-05-16 draft-ietf-payload-rtp-vc2hq-06 *
Elwyn Davies   Last Call 2018-06-15 draft-ietf-teas-actn-info-model-08
Pete Resnick   Telechat  2018-04-27 draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-11 *
Ines RoblesTelechat  2018-04-27 draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5750-bis-06 *
Meral Shirazipour  Telechat  2018-04-04 draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-05 
*
Peter Yee  Telechat  2018-06-12 draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-24 *

Last calls:

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Linda Dunbar   Last Call 2018-06-18 
draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-08
Francis Dupont Last Call 2018-06-19 
draft-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label-11
Roni Even  Last Call 2018-06-28 draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang-14 *
Vijay Gurbani  Last Call 2018-06-25 draft-ietf-6man-rfc6434-bis-08
Joel Halpern   Last Call 2018-06-25 draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-10
Erik Kline Last Call 2018-06-28 draft-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis-06

Early review requests:

Reviewer   DueDraft
Matthew Miller 2018-06-30 draft-ietf-cellar-ffv1-03

* Other revision previously reviewed
** This revision already reviewed

Next in the reviewer rotation:

  Fernando Gont
  Vijay Gurbani
  Wassim Haddad
  Joel Halpern
  Christer Holmberg
  Russ Housley
  Erik Kline
  Jouni Korhonen
  Paul Kyzivat
  Matthew Miller

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