[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-allan-5g-fmc-encapsulation-04

2020-07-03 Thread Russ Housley via Datatracker
Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] [Dots] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-23

2020-07-03 Thread elwynd
Hi, Daniel.Thanks for your response. The changes look good to me.  A couple of minor language improvements if I may suggest:s1, para 1: s/mitigations - which highly depends on a timely reaction/mitigations that are generally highly dependent on a timely reaction by the system./s2, DDoS

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-allan-5g-fmc-encapsulation-04

2020-07-03 Thread Donald Eastlake
Hi Russ, Thanks for the review. See my responses as one co-author below. On Fri, Jul 3, 2020 at 12:33 PM Russ Housley via Datatracker wrote: > > Reviewer: Russ Housley > Review result: Almost Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART)

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-flowspec-09

2020-07-03 Thread Roni Even via Datatracker
Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information,

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-flowspec-09

2020-07-03 Thread Adrian Farrel
Thanks for taking time to so the review, Roni. Best, Adrian -Original Message- From: Roni Even via Datatracker Sent: 03 July 2020 08:08 To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: p...@ietf.org; last-c...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-pce-pcep-flowspec@ietf.org Subject: Genart last call review of

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-16

2020-07-03 Thread Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting