[Gen-art] review of draft-mcwalter-uri-mib-02.txt

2007-02-12 Thread Francis Dupont
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document:

[Gen-art] Re: review of draft-mcwalter-uri-mib-02.txt

2007-02-12 Thread Bill Fenner
- 2 page 3: the way STD 58 is referenced is inelegant (but it seems the issue is more in the STD 58 covering multiple RFCs...) This is copied from the MIB boilerplate; see http://www.ops.ietf.org/mib-boilerplate.html The awkward references have come up a few times, but it's not appropriate

[Gen-art] Re: Last Call: draft-heard-rfc4181-update (RFC 4181 Update to Recognize the IETF Trust) to BCP [WAS: Gen-art review of draft-heard-rfc4181-update-00.txt]

2007-02-12 Thread C. M. Heard
On Tue, 23 Jan 2007, Gonzalo Camarillo wrote: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call

[Gen-art] Re: Last Call: draft-heard-rfc4181-update (RFC 4181 Update to Recognize the IETF Trust) to BCP [WAS: Gen-art review of draft-heard-rfc4181-update-00.txt]

2007-02-12 Thread Gonzalo Camarillo
Hi Mike, as the review says, they are just nits. If you disagree with them, feel free to ignore them (as long as your AD is also OK with that, of course). Cheers, Gonzalo C. M. Heard wrote: On Tue, 23 Jan 2007, Gonzalo Camarillo wrote: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team