[Gen-art] draft-ejzak-sipping-p-em-auth-04 addressing all LC comments

2007-06-11 Thread Ejzak, Richard P \(Richard\)
Please note the attached draft 04 of draft-ejzak-sipping-p-em-auth. This document reflects all changes requested during last call by Jon Peterson, the responsible AD. The latest comments were from Jon, David and Alfred. There are some additional minor corrections included by me. Thank you for yo

[Gen-art] Re: review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-rfc3682bis-09.txt

2007-06-11 Thread Pekka Savola
Hi Francis, Thanks for your review. The draft does say 'obsoletes' in the Abstract and includes Appendix B on Changes since RFC 3682, but I guess we can say this explicitly. Wrt. your TrustRadius comment, the intent was to say that you would accept any value within TrustRadius from 255. I.

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-rfc3682bis-09.txt

2007-06-11 Thread Francis Dupont
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-