> if the "with the preshared keys" came with the "in main mode" the best and
> simplest is to remove the end of the sentence, i.e.:
> means of IKEv2 [RFC4306], operating in main mode with preshared keys.
> ->
> means of IKEv2 [RFC4306].
Okay, I will make this change.
Hmm. I never saw that message, although it is in the gen-art
list archive. I've restored the various cc's in this reply.
Yes, these changes look fine to me. Thanks!
Brian
On 2008-12-17 12:12, Pradosh Mohapatra (pmohapat) wrote:
> Hi Brian,
>
> Following up...
>
> Do you have any specific
Hi all,
I have uploaded the reviews received to date, along with the updated
spreadsheets. Please let me know if there are any errors or omissions.
Thanks,
Mary.
> _
> From: Barnes, Mary (RICH2:AR00)
> Sent: Thursday, December 11, 2008 10:51
In your previous mail you wrote:
> the document is very unpleasant to read
That would have to be regarded as a comment which is not actionable ;-)
=> if you find a magical way to improve the wording it should be very great
(as a not native English writer I understand the issue but t
> the document is very unpleasant to read
That would have to be regarded as a comment which is not actionable ;-)
> too many authors
We intend to leave the set of authors as is, and intend to remove the
notation "(editor)". In my opinion, this is not an appropriate topic to be
mentione
Just as a heads-up - this document is on the agenda for the next telechat -
I agree with Abhay's suggestions for changes that will appear in the "next
revision", but the next revision hasn't come out yet, at least not that I've
seen.
Thanks!
Spencer
- Original Message -
From: "Abhay
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-s
All of my comments from version 7 have been addressed by the editors - ready
for publication as Proposed Standard.
Thanks!
Spencer
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/a
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for
this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve
these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-ospf-m
