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On Mon, Apr 06, 2009 at 10:35:23AM -0500, Nicolas Williams wrote:
On Sun, Apr 05, 2009 at 10:30:21AM +1200, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
Summary: Almost ready; needs one clarification.
Comments:
I was expecting the sentence quoted below to be updated
following Nico's comments on my
I reviewed the version 03, I keep the Ready summary.
Regards
francis.dup...@fdupont.fr
PS: the spelling error in 7.1 page 12 only changed, correct spelling
(checked twice as it seems really hard to type :-) is: signaling
(leave it to the RFC Editor...)
Just to let people know, version 10 of this draft addresses all my questions
from my -09 review.
Ready to publish as Informational.
Thanks,
Spencer
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Nico,
The paragraph is identical in the -05 and -06 drafts,
so no, actually you didn't change anything after my review.
I still find the text a little unclear.
I don't feel strongly about this; Russ has just logged it
as a comment, so it's up to you and Tim whether to change
anything.
Brian
On Tue, Apr 07, 2009 at 09:09:03AM +1200, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
The paragraph is identical in the -05 and -06 drafts,
so no, actually you didn't change anything after my review.
It differs rather slightly. I guess the current form still strikes me
as clear so I didn't realize that I hadn't
