[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2013-10-31

Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: Reviewer LC end Draft - Alexey Melnikov 2013-11-27 draft-turner-ct-keypackage-receipt-n-error-algs-03 Ben Campbell 2013-11-28

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring-06

Thanks for the review, Ben. As you pointed out, the description in 3.2.18 wrongly specified a delta rather than a total; I've fixed it. I also clarified the third paragraph of the Introduction to say that the existing models don't yet contain enough elements - which is the point of this

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring-06

Thanks for the response. Those changes would address all of my comments. Thanks! Ben. On Oct 31, 2013, at 11:05 AM, Paul Aitken pait...@cisco.com wrote: Thanks for the review, Ben. As you pointed out, the description in 3.2.18 wrongly specified a delta rather than a total; I've fixed it.