[Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-nullmx-05

2014-07-16 Thread Black, David
This is a combined Gen-ART and OPS-DIR review. Boilerplate for both follows ... I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at: . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-reqs-11.txt

2014-07-16 Thread Francis Dupont
In your previous mail you wrote: > > - 3 3.7 (twice), 3.11 page 4 and 4 4.3 page 6: need -> needs > > i believe that "x need not do y" is correct, so will leave it to the > rfced if you will indulge => you are the native English writer (:-). Anyway the RFC Editor could fix it if needed...