Hi, Ben,
It looks like I never responded to this one. -- My apologies for that.
Please find my comments in-line...
On 12/11/2014 06:56 PM, Ben Campbell wrote:
Minor issues:
-- abstract, last sentence:
I didn't find this assertion in the body itself. It would be nice
to see support for
Thanks for the thorough review Elwyn.
I've made changes in the form of a proposed change set against the
editor's copy.
https://github.com/http2/http2-spec/pull/692
You can review the changes at that link. Note that some of the typos
you caught were already fixed, or will be fixed in other
Hi,
On 1/20/15 8:17 AM, Martin Thomson wrote:
On 19 January 2015 at 02:37, Elwyn Davies elw...@dial.pipex.com wrote:
Summary:
Almost ready. A well written document with just a few nits really. I am
slightly surprised (having not been following httpbis in detail) that HTTP/2
is so tightly
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