Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-opsec-dhcpv6-shield-04

2015-01-19 Thread Fernando Gont
Hi, Ben, It looks like I never responded to this one. -- My apologies for that. Please find my comments in-line... On 12/11/2014 06:56 PM, Ben Campbell wrote: Minor issues: -- abstract, last sentence: I didn't find this assertion in the body itself. It would be nice to see support for

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-http2-16

2015-01-19 Thread Martin Thomson
Thanks for the thorough review Elwyn. I've made changes in the form of a proposed change set against the editor's copy. https://github.com/http2/http2-spec/pull/692 You can review the changes at that link. Note that some of the typos you caught were already fixed, or will be fixed in other

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-http2-16

2015-01-19 Thread Eliot Lear
Hi, On 1/20/15 8:17 AM, Martin Thomson wrote: On 19 January 2015 at 02:37, Elwyn Davies elw...@dial.pipex.com wrote: Summary: Almost ready. A well written document with just a few nits really. I am slightly surprised (having not been following httpbis in detail) that HTTP/2 is so tightly

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-drinks-spp-protocol-over-soap-07

2015-01-19 Thread Roni Even
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document:

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-radext-radius-fragmentation-10

2015-01-19 Thread Meral Shirazipour
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document:

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-json-i-json-05

2015-01-19 Thread Meral Shirazipour
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: