Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv

On 7/6/16 5:18 PM, Donald Eastlake wrote: Hi Paul, On Wed, Jul 6, 2016 at 1:34 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote: Donald, On 7/5/16 9:51 PM, Donald Eastlake wrote: Hi Paul, Version -09 has been uploaded with the intent that it resolve your comments. Looks good except for

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv

Hi Paul, On Wed, Jul 6, 2016 at 1:34 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote: > Donald, > > On 7/5/16 9:51 PM, Donald Eastlake wrote: >> >> Hi Paul, >> >> Version -09 has been uploaded with the intent that it resolve your >> comments. > > > Looks good except for one thing: > > Some of the

[Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc5205-bis-09

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv

Donald, On 7/5/16 9:51 PM, Donald Eastlake wrote: Hi Paul, Version -09 has been uploaded with the intent that it resolve your comments. Looks good except for one thing: Some of the new text in section 7 has me baffled: The following processes should be followed in interpreting sets of

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-trill-irb-13.txt

Hi, These are all fixed in version -14 except that the last comment re Section 7.1 to make the change "TENANT-LABEL -> TENANT-GWMAC-LABEL" still has a tiny glitch in it. In particular, there is an extra space just before "GWMAC" so it's "TENANT- GWMAC-LABEL". This certainly does not seem worth a

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc6253-bis-09

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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-pal-eidr-urn-2016-01

On 07/05/2016 07:45 PM, Pierre-Anthony Lemieux wrote: Hi Vijay, A revised I-D that adds a note under "Rules for Lexical Equivalence" is available at [1]. [1] https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-pal-eidr-urn-2016-02.txt Awesome! Thanks. - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Nokia