Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-richer-vectors-of-trust-12

[Alissa Cooper]

Dale, thanks for your reviews of this document. Authors, thanks for addressing 
Dale’s comments. I filed a DISCUSS ballot to get a question answered about 
OpenID Connect.

Thanks,
Alissa

> On Jul 22, 2018, at 10:04 PM, Dale Worley  wrote:
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> Document:  draft-richer-vectors-of-trust-12
> Reviewer:  Dale R. Worley
> Review Date:  2018-07-22
> IETF LC End Date:  2018-06-26
> IESG Telechat date:  2018-08-02
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> Summary:
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>   This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.
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> Nit:
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>   3.1.  On-the-Wire Representation
> 
>   Vector values MUST be communicated along with of a trustmark URL
>   (Section 5) to give the components and component values context.
> 
> s/with of/with/
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Re: [Gen-art] [Extra] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-extra-imap-objectid-06

[Bron Gondwana]

On Sat, Jul 28, 2018, at 03:57, Pete Resnick wrote:
> Reviewer: Pete Resnick
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> Document: draft-ietf-extra-imap-objectid-06
> Reviewer: Pete Resnick
> Review Date: 2018-07-27
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-07-13
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-08-02
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> Summary: Ready with Nits
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> Major issues: None
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> Minor issues: None
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> Thanks for the changes responding to my review. Good work.
> 
> §5.2, ¶6:
> 
> OLD
>   THREADID is optional, if the server doesn't support THREADID or is
> NEW
>   THREADID is OPTIONAL; if the server doesn't support THREADID or is

Yep, fixed.

> §5.2 ¶7:
> 
> Not clear to me why the THREADID and EMAILID can't be the same. I
> assume given> the MUST it's going to be some sort of interoperability problem,
> but it does> seem odd. But don't change it on my account.

This is basically a "developers will make assumptions about relatedness
which may not always hold".  We even XOR our THREADID against a constant
after calculating it from the EMAILID in our server now, so that
developers don't get lazy and make shortcuts.
> §8.2 ¶2:
> 
> s/backend object collide/backend object identifiers

Fixed this too.

Thanks again for great feedback,

Bron.

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[Gen-art] Review Assignments

[Jean Mahoney]

Hi all,

The following reviewers have assignments:

Last calls:

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Jari Arkko Last Call 2018-08-06 draft-ietf-oauth-token-exchange-14
Stewart Bryant Last Call 2018-08-08 draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-12
Linda Dunbar   Last Call 2018-08-10 
draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-tree-validation-02
Roni Even  Last Call 2018-08-13 draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis-11
Tim Evens  Last Call 2018-08-13 draft-ietf-radext-coa-proxy-05
Vijay Gurbani  Last Call 2018-08-14 draft-ietf-httpbis-expect-ct-07
Jouni Korhonen Last Call 2018-07-09 draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-19
Ines RoblesLast Call 2018-08-13 draft-york-p-charge-info-08
Dale WorleyLast Call 2018-08-08 draft-ietf-acme-acme-13 *
Peter Yee  Last Call 2018-08-03 
draft-ietf-regext-allocation-token-08

* Other revision previously reviewed
** This revision already reviewed

Next in the reviewer rotation:

  Joel Halpern
  Christer Holmberg
  Russ Housley
  Erik Kline
  Jouni Korhonen
  Paul Kyzivat
  Matthew Miller
  Francesca Palombini
  Pete Resnick
  Ines Robles

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Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-12

[Alissa Cooper]

Joel, thanks for your reviews of this document. Authors/WG, thanks for 
addressing Joel’s comments. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Jul 26, 2018, at 11:40 PM, Joel Halpern  wrote:
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> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review result: Ready
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> Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-12
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review Date: 2018-07-26
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-25
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-08-02
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> Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard
>My thanks to the authors and working group for addressing my comments.
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