Thank you very much for the corrections!
Ines
On Mon, Nov 5, 2018, 11:33 AM Barry Leiba > Nits/editorial comments:
> >
> > Page 18: “ptypes” →types
> > Page 22: “concocted” → connected?
>
> As Scott K says, "ptypes" is correct as written.
>
> "Concocted" is also correct as written.
>
> Barry
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> Page 18: “ptypes” →types
> Page 22: “concocted” → connected?
As Scott K says, "ptypes" is correct as written.
"Concocted" is also correct as written.
Barry
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Thanks Chris, these changes address my review comments.
Francesca
On 04/11/2018, 19:55, "Chris Wendt" wrote:
Thank Francesca for the review. Comments inline.
> On Nov 2, 2018, at 12:14 PM, Francesca Palombini
wrote:
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> Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
> Review
Thank Francesca for the review. Comments inline.
> On Nov 2, 2018, at 12:14 PM, Francesca Palombini
> wrote:
>
> Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
> Review result: Ready with Issues
>
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