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[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-bandwidth-availability-14

2019-03-28 Thread Paul Kyzivat

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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-bandwidth-availability-14
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2019-01-23
IETF LC End Date: 2019-01-31
IESG Telechat date: 2019-04-09

Summary:

This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the 
review.


Issues:

Major: 0
Minor: 1
Nits:  0

1) MINOR (maybe MAJOR):

Section 3.2 includes the following:

When a node does not support the Availability TLV, it SHOULD
generate PathErr message with the error code "Extended Class-Type
Error" and the error value "Class-Type mismatch" (see [RFC2205]).

This seems to be placing a normative requirement on implementations of 
RSVP that *don't* support this document. That is clearly impossible.


I am guessing that this is the standard normative behavior for 
implementations of RSVP that encounter a TLV type they don't understand. 
(I tried to find this in RFC2205 but failed.) If so, then this section 
should be reworded to indicate that this is the behavior that will occur 
rather than a new normative requirement.


OTOH, if this is not the standard handling for unknown TLV types then 
you need to rethink this.


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Re: [Gen-art] Review Assignments

2019-03-28 Thread Roni Even (A)

Linda,
The LC ended March 18, the Telechat is April 11th
Roni

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Jean, 

I got your email today for reviewing the " 
draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg-25" which has Telechat  2019-03-18. 

So the draft has already been discussed on March 18, correct? Is it still 
useful to review this document? 

Linda

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Hi all,

The following reviewers have assignments:

For telechat 2019-04-11

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Elwyn Davies   Telechat  2018-10-29 
draft-ietf-pce-gmpls-pcep-extensions-13
Linda Dunbar   Telechat  2019-03-18 
draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg-25
Paul Kyzivat   Telechat  2019-01-31 
draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-bandwidth-availability-14 *
Meral Shirazipour  Telechat  2019-02-11 
draft-ietf-extra-imap-fetch-preview-03
Peter Yee  Telechat  2019-02-27 draft-ietf-dnsop-algorithm-update-07

Last calls:

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Jari Arkko Last Call 2019-04-05 
draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-06
Stewart Bryant Last Call 2019-04-08 draft-ietf-core-multipart-ct-03
Brian CarpenterLast Call 2019-04-08 draft-ietf-oauth-jwt-bcp-04
Roni Even  Last Call 2019-04-10 draft-ietf-acme-caa-06
Vijay Gurbani  Last Call 2019-04-10 
draft-ietf-avtcore-multiplex-guidelines-08
Joel Halpern   Last Call 2019-04-10 draft-ietf-lamps-pkix-shake-08
Russ Housley   Last Call 2019-04-11 draft-ietf-roll-useofrplinfo-25
Pete Resnick   Last Call 2019-04-11 draft-ietf-sidrops-lta-use-cases-05
Dan Romascanu  Last Call 2019-04-12 draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-34
Meral Shirazipour  Last Call 2019-04-12 
draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-event-notifications-17
Meral Shirazipour  Last Call 2019-04-01 
draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07
Robert Sparks  Last Call 2019-04-12 draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-13

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Re: [Gen-art] Review Assignments

2019-03-28 Thread Robert Sparks


Hi Linda -

The Last Call ended on 18Mar. That document is on the 11Apr telechat, so 
it is still useful to review the document.


RjS

On 3/28/19 4:16 AM, Linda Dunbar wrote:

Jean,

I got your email today for reviewing the " 
draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg-25" which has Telechat  2019-03-18.

So the draft has already been discussed on March 18, correct? Is it still 
useful to review this document?

Linda

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From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Jean Mahoney via 
Datatracker
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To: gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: [Gen-art] Review Assignments

Hi all,

The following reviewers have assignments:

For telechat 2019-04-11

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Elwyn Davies   Telechat  2018-10-29 
draft-ietf-pce-gmpls-pcep-extensions-13
Linda Dunbar   Telechat  2019-03-18 
draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg-25
Paul Kyzivat   Telechat  2019-01-31 
draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-bandwidth-availability-14 *
Meral Shirazipour  Telechat  2019-02-11 
draft-ietf-extra-imap-fetch-preview-03
Peter Yee  Telechat  2019-02-27 draft-ietf-dnsop-algorithm-update-07

Last calls:

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Jari Arkko Last Call 2019-04-05 
draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-06
Stewart Bryant Last Call 2019-04-08 draft-ietf-core-multipart-ct-03
Brian CarpenterLast Call 2019-04-08 draft-ietf-oauth-jwt-bcp-04
Roni Even  Last Call 2019-04-10 draft-ietf-acme-caa-06
Vijay Gurbani  Last Call 2019-04-10 
draft-ietf-avtcore-multiplex-guidelines-08
Joel Halpern   Last Call 2019-04-10 draft-ietf-lamps-pkix-shake-08
Russ Housley   Last Call 2019-04-11 draft-ietf-roll-useofrplinfo-25
Pete Resnick   Last Call 2019-04-11 draft-ietf-sidrops-lta-use-cases-05
Dan Romascanu  Last Call 2019-04-12 draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-34
Meral Shirazipour  Last Call 2019-04-12 
draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-event-notifications-17
Meral Shirazipour  Last Call 2019-04-01 
draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07
Robert Sparks  Last Call 2019-04-12 draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-13

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Re: [Gen-art] Review Assignments

2019-03-28 Thread Linda Dunbar

Jean, 

I got your email today for reviewing the " 
draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg-25" which has Telechat  2019-03-18. 

So the draft has already been discussed on March 18, correct? Is it still 
useful to review this document? 

Linda

-Original Message-
From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Jean Mahoney via 
Datatracker
Sent: Thursday, March 28, 2019 10:10 AM
To: gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: [Gen-art] Review Assignments

Hi all,

The following reviewers have assignments:

For telechat 2019-04-11

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Elwyn Davies   Telechat  2018-10-29 
draft-ietf-pce-gmpls-pcep-extensions-13
Linda Dunbar   Telechat  2019-03-18 
draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg-25
Paul Kyzivat   Telechat  2019-01-31 
draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-bandwidth-availability-14 *
Meral Shirazipour  Telechat  2019-02-11 
draft-ietf-extra-imap-fetch-preview-03
Peter Yee  Telechat  2019-02-27 draft-ietf-dnsop-algorithm-update-07

Last calls:

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Jari Arkko Last Call 2019-04-05 
draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-06
Stewart Bryant Last Call 2019-04-08 draft-ietf-core-multipart-ct-03
Brian CarpenterLast Call 2019-04-08 draft-ietf-oauth-jwt-bcp-04
Roni Even  Last Call 2019-04-10 draft-ietf-acme-caa-06
Vijay Gurbani  Last Call 2019-04-10 
draft-ietf-avtcore-multiplex-guidelines-08
Joel Halpern   Last Call 2019-04-10 draft-ietf-lamps-pkix-shake-08
Russ Housley   Last Call 2019-04-11 draft-ietf-roll-useofrplinfo-25
Pete Resnick   Last Call 2019-04-11 draft-ietf-sidrops-lta-use-cases-05
Dan Romascanu  Last Call 2019-04-12 draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-34
Meral Shirazipour  Last Call 2019-04-12 
draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-event-notifications-17
Meral Shirazipour  Last Call 2019-04-01 
draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07
Robert Sparks  Last Call 2019-04-12 draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-13

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[Gen-art] Review Assignments

2019-03-28 Thread Jean Mahoney via Datatracker

Hi all,

The following reviewers have assignments:

For telechat 2019-04-11

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Elwyn Davies   Telechat  2018-10-29 
draft-ietf-pce-gmpls-pcep-extensions-13
Linda Dunbar   Telechat  2019-03-18 
draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg-25
Paul Kyzivat   Telechat  2019-01-31 
draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-bandwidth-availability-14 *
Meral Shirazipour  Telechat  2019-02-11 
draft-ietf-extra-imap-fetch-preview-03
Peter Yee  Telechat  2019-02-27 draft-ietf-dnsop-algorithm-update-07

Last calls:

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Jari Arkko Last Call 2019-04-05 
draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-06
Stewart Bryant Last Call 2019-04-08 draft-ietf-core-multipart-ct-03
Brian CarpenterLast Call 2019-04-08 draft-ietf-oauth-jwt-bcp-04
Roni Even  Last Call 2019-04-10 draft-ietf-acme-caa-06
Vijay Gurbani  Last Call 2019-04-10 
draft-ietf-avtcore-multiplex-guidelines-08
Joel Halpern   Last Call 2019-04-10 draft-ietf-lamps-pkix-shake-08
Russ Housley   Last Call 2019-04-11 draft-ietf-roll-useofrplinfo-25
Pete Resnick   Last Call 2019-04-11 draft-ietf-sidrops-lta-use-cases-05
Dan Romascanu  Last Call 2019-04-12 draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-34
Meral Shirazipour  Last Call 2019-04-12 
draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-event-notifications-17
Meral Shirazipour  Last Call 2019-04-01 
draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07
Robert Sparks  Last Call 2019-04-12 draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-13

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  Stewart Bryant
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  Vijay Gurbani

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