[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pim-drlb-13

2019-11-05 Thread Pete Resnick via Datatracker
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-login-security-05

2019-11-05 Thread Brian E Carpenter
James, Comments in line: On 06-Nov-19 07:58, Gould, James wrote: > Brian,   > > Thank you for your review and feedback.  My responses are embedded below.  I > will include updates based on your feedback in > draft-ietf-regext-login-security-06 at the conclusion of the last call. > > --   > >

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-login-security-05

2019-11-05 Thread Gould, James
Brian, Thank you for your review and feedback. My responses are embedded below. I will include updates based on your feedback in draft-ietf-regext-login-security-06 at the conclusion of the last call. -- JG James Gould Distinguished Engineer jgo...@verisign.com

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-mpls-rmr-12.txt

2019-11-05 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rmr-12.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20191028 IETF LC End Date: 20191105 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Requirement Language page 1: plea