[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cellar-ffv1-16

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-06

Reviewer: Dale Worley Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-21

Thanks Christer, that all looks good to me, Regards Brian On 13-Jul-20 20:58, Christer Holmberg wrote: > Hi Brian, > > Thank You for the review! Please see inline. > > > Nits: > - > >>> 4.1. MSRP URI >>> >>> transport /= "dc" >>> >>> I see that RFC7977 takes a slightly

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-21

On 14-Jul-20 02:58, Paul Kyzivat wrote: > Brian, > > On 7/12/20 6:40 PM, Brian Carpenter via Datatracker wrote: > >> Nits: >> - >> 4.1. MSRP URI >> transport /= "dc" >> >> I see that RFC7977 takes a slightly different approach to updating the ABNF: >>

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-21

Brian, On 7/12/20 6:40 PM, Brian Carpenter via Datatracker wrote: Nits: - 4.1. MSRP URI transport /= "dc" I see that RFC7977 takes a slightly different approach to updating the ABNF: transport = "tcp" / "ws" / 1*ALPHANUM The advantage of listing out

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-stir-passport-divert-07

Thanks for these notes, Pete. I incorporated these fixes into the -08 (but apparently neglected to write and say so at the time). Jon Peterson Neustar, Inc. Document: draft-ietf-stir-passport-divert-07 Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review Date: 2020-01-09 IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-02

Re: [Gen-art] [core] I-D Action: draft-ietf-core-resource-directory-25.txt

Hello Russ and Adam, On Mon, Jul 13, 2020 at 06:42:09AM -0700, internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote: > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-core-resource-directory/ the newly submitted -25 was uploaded to address the points you've brought up

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-21

Hi Brian, Thank You for the review! Please see inline. Nits: - >> 4.1. MSRP URI >> >> transport /= "dc" >> >> I see that RFC7977 takes a slightly different approach to updating the ABNF: >> >> transport = "tcp" / "ws" / 1*ALPHANUM >> > The advantage of listing out > >

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc7030est-clarify-08

Hi Michael, Yes, that would be great, if possible. Thank you, Ines On Mon, Jul 13, 2020 at 3:56 AM Michael Richardson wrote: > > Ines Robles via Datatracker wrote: > > 2- Introduction: "reports from implementers suggest..." It would be > nice to add > > reference/s here > > Well,