Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lwig-minimal-esp-04

2021-04-02 Thread Daniel Migault
Hi Roni, Thanks for the review. We can of course add that RFC4303 is authoritative in the main body. I will update the document. I am wondering what differences you have in mind. Of course the document are different but I am wondering if there is anything we should clarify. Yours, Daniel

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-originator-09

2021-04-02 Thread Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)
Hi Vijay, Thanks for your review. About the nit, this was the output of the xml2rfc tool - for some reason it does not seem to picking up the latest drafts/references. I didn't want to hand craft something like this. Thanks, Ketan -Original Message- From: Vijay Gurbani via

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-originator-09

2021-04-02 Thread Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker
Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lwig-minimal-esp-04

2021-04-02 Thread Roni Even via Datatracker
Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more