Reviewer: Ines Robles Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-evpntest-07 Reviewer: Ines Robles Review Date: 2021-05-24 IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-24 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document defines methodologies for benchmarking Ethernet VPN (EVPN) and Provider Backbone Bridging EVPN (PBB-EVPN) performance. This document is Informational. No major issues found. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Check punctuation, some sentences do not start with space after period. e.g. page 16 "... sample.The time ..." - Some paragraphs do not start with upper-case letter. e.g. page 10, "confirm the DUT..." - I would expand PBB-EVPN the first time used. Perhaps in the introduction, "Provider Backbone Bridging EVPN (PBB-EVPN) is defined in RFC 7623, discussing how can be combined with EVPNs to provide a new/combined solution...." Thank you for this document, Ines _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
