Re: [Gen-art] [homenet] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-18

2022-10-04 Thread Daniel Migault
Hi Christer, Thanks for the review. I do agree with you the introduction is taken as a whole quite long. Its current structure resulted from (multiple) discussions where we have been told to clarify some upcoming questions many people in the group would come up with and needed to be clarified.

Re: [Gen-art] [homenet] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-21

2022-10-04 Thread Daniel Migault
Hi Ines, Thanks for the reviews. We can of course include 7227 and I added the reference as follows: This section details the payload of the DHCPv6 options following the guidelines of { {?RFC7227}}. Regarding your second comment, I think what we meant is that the trust associated with the

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-21

2022-10-04 Thread Ines Robles via Datatracker
Reviewer: Ines Robles Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-robust-blocks-05

2022-10-04 Thread Tim Evens (tievens)
Looks good, thanks! On 9/26/22, 10:44 PM, "mohamed.boucad...@orange.com" wrote: Hi Tim, Thank you for the review. You can track the changes made to address your comments at: https://tinyurl.com/dots-robust-latest. FWIW, please see inline for more context. Cheers, Med > -Message

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-18

2022-10-04 Thread Christer Holmberg via Datatracker
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For