Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08

2023-03-03 Thread Vijay Gurbani
On Fri, Mar 3, 2023 at 4:33 PM David Schinazi wrote: > Hi Vijay, and thank you for your review! > > The distinction between MUST and SHALL in this document is intentional. We > use MUST to indicate "if X happens, then you MUST do Y" whereas we use > SHALL to indicate "The procedure is as

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08

2023-03-03 Thread David Schinazi
Hi Vijay, and thank you for your review! The distinction between MUST and SHALL in this document is intentional. We use MUST to indicate "if X happens, then you MUST do Y" whereas we use SHALL to indicate "The procedure is as follows: step 1 you SHALL do Z". Based on previous RFCs published by

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08

2023-03-03 Thread Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker
Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cellar-matroska-15

2023-03-03 Thread Michael Richardson
Thank you Elwyn for the review comments, I'm sure the nits are well appreciated! > General: I am concerned about the long term stability of the web site > referenced for the Matroska Container Format, reference [MCF].  Among other > issues it is not accessed via https and it claims that it is