[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-behave-multicast-03.txt

2006-10-04 Thread Francis Dupont
-behave-multicast-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 3 oct 2006 IETF LC Date: 2 oct 2006 IESG Telechat date: not known yet Summary: Ready Comments: I have two very minor suggestions: - 2.1 page 4: in as if it was a host was - is (or were)? (I propose to let the RFC editor decide) - some

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-06.txt

2006-10-03 Thread Francis Dupont
Thanks, I'll be happy to read the new version as soon as it'll be available. [EMAIL PROTECTED] ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-06.txt

2006-10-03 Thread Francis Dupont
In your previous mail you wrote: We have one detail still to address from your review, and that is to add a citation about deleting IP options being forbidden, or supposed to be forbidden, for IPv6. Do you have a citation to suggest for that? = there is nothing very clear about

[Gen-art] summary of draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-06.txt review

2006-09-18 Thread Francis Dupont
About draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-06.txt, the summary will be: Not Ready There is no real problem (yet :-) with the document but my comments won't be fixed without some editing... Of course, I'll try to send comments (at least the first comments) ASAP, and including to the authors. Regards

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-experiments-03.txt

2006-09-09 Thread Francis Dupont
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-experiments-03.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: Ready Minor

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-mmusic-fec-grouping-05.txt

2006-09-04 Thread Francis Dupont
For IETF Last Call reviews: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-mmusic-fec-grouping-05.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-rddp-ddp-06.txt

2006-08-31 Thread Francis Dupont
In your previous mail you wrote: As you suggested, I did contact the IESG, specifically the Security ADs, about IKEv1 vs. IKEv2, and the verdict is to stick with IKEv1 as profiled by RFC 3723 for iSCSI so that iSCSI and RDDP use the same profile of IPsec. If/when RFC 3723 is

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sieve-spamtestbis-05.txt

2006-08-02 Thread Francis Dupont
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-sieve-spamtestbis-05.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: Ready Two

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-rddp-ddp-06.txt

2006-07-31 Thread Francis Dupont
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-rddp-ddp-06.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: not Ready I have two main

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-rddp-rdmap-06.txt

2006-07-31 Thread Francis Dupont
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-rddp-rdmap-06.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: not Ready I have the same

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dnsext-mdns-46.txt

2006-07-06 Thread Francis Dupont
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-dnsext-mdns-46.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: Ready with nits Some

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dnsext-mdns-46.txt

2006-07-06 Thread Francis Dupont
In your previous mail you wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-dnsext-mdns-46.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-avt-rtp-eac3-01.txt

2006-05-28 Thread Francis Dupont
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-FOOBAR.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: ready Thanks [EMAIL PROTECTED] PS:

[Gen-art] review of draft-kornijenko-ivis-urn-00.txt

2006-04-25 Thread Francis Dupont
Summary: basically ready with nits I strongly recommend to convert the document to a tool like xml2rfc before to send it to the RFC editor! Other concerns: - the document should specify which kind of namespace registration is asked for (I've assume formal) - so there must be an IANA

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