[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-01.txt

2019-09-26 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-01.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20190918 IETF LC End Date: 20190925 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 1.1 page 3: add RFC 8174 with RF

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-tls-grease-03.txt

2019-08-14 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-tls-grease-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20190803 IETF LC End Date: 20190812 IESG Telechat date: 20190822 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 8 p

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-13.txt

2019-07-10 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-13.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20190704 IETF LC End Date: 20190708 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - spelling: 1 page 2, 2 pag

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-20.txt

2019-07-01 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-20.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20190633 IETF LC End Date: 20190626 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 1 page 3: the IT

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-10.txt

2019-05-13 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: Ready Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2019/05/11 IETF LC End Date: 2019/05/21 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2: bad padding in 2. and 2.1. titles in text

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls-18.txt

2019-03-07 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls-18.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20190228 IETF LC End Date: 20190307 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 3 and 7 p

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sipcore-reason-q850-loc-05.txt

2019-02-12 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-sipcore-reason-q850-loc-05.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20190207 IETF LC End Date: 20190213 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 1 page 2: expand th

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-curdle-gss-keyex-sha2-08.txt (details)

2019-01-09 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-curdle-gss-keyex-sha2-08 Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2019-01-08 IETF LC End Date: 2019-01-08 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - sec

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-gss-keyex-sha2-08

2019-01-08 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-clue-protocol-17.txt

2018-10-18 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-clue-protocol-17.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20181017 IETF LC End Date: 20181017 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I have a problem with the CLUE

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-06.txt

2018-10-11 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20181005 IETF LC End Date: 20181010 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: I reviewed the vers

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ccamp-mw-yang-09.txt

2018-10-02 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-mw-yang-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180926 IETF LC End Date: 20181002 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: The yang model mixes config,

[Gen-art] (full) review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis

2018-09-17 Thread Francis Dupont
of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-17.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180911 IESG Telechat date: 20180927 Summary: Ready with Nits Major issues: None Minor issues

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-16

2018-09-12 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-18

2018-07-03 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label-11.txt

2018-06-19 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label-11.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180616 IETF LC End Date: 20180619 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready with Nits Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 6 a

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-16.txt

2018-05-23 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-16.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180512 IETF LC End Date: 20180521 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready with nits Major issues: None Minor issues: Missing keyword section (aka RFC 2119 section). BTW

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-secevent-token-08.txt

2018-05-09 Thread Francis Dupont
of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-secevent-token-08.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180419 IETF LC End Date: 201805xx IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor

[Gen-art] review of draft-housley-suite-b-to-historic-04.txt

2018-03-16 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-housley-suite-b-to-historic-04.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180315 IETF LC End Date: 20180316 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1: double

[Gen-art] draft-ietf-tls-record-limit-02.txt

2018-03-16 Thread Francis Dupont
see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-tls-record-limit-02.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180315 IESG Telechat date: 20180320 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 5 page 6 (w

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-21.txt

2018-03-05 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-21.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180225 IETF LC End Date: 20180228 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: (I took my notes on vers

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-hip-dex-06.txt

2018-02-26 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-hip-dex-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180224 IETF LC End Date: 20180226 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 3: you use the US sp

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sidr-slurm-06.txt

2018-02-26 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-sidr-slurm-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180217 IETF LC End Date: 20180221 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 6 page 14

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-bess-fat-pw-bgp-03.txt

2018-02-14 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bess-fat-pw-bgp-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2018/02/07 IETF LC End Date: 20180209 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1: please exp

[Gen-art] review of https://pad.isc.org/p/Kea_Planning_2018-01-25 (update)

2018-01-25 Thread Francis Dupont
see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180123 IETF LC End Date: 20180115 IESG Telechat date: 20180125 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial co

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-06

2018-01-23 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-as-instanceid-05

2018-01-09 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-centralized-replication-12

2018-01-09 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] review of draft-housley-id-sig-update-02.txt

2018-01-02 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-housley-id-sig-update-02.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20171221 IETF LC End Date: 20180102 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 10

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-trill-centralized-replication-10.txt

2017-12-11 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-trill-centralized-replication-10.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20171209 IETF LC End Date: 20171212 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready with Issues Major issues: None Minor issues: C-nickname is used before being defined

[Gen-art] review of draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-as-instanceid-05.txt

2017-12-11 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-as-instanceid-05.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20171124 IETF LC End Date: 20171208 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dhc-relay-port-06.txt

2017-10-24 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dhc-relay-port-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20171024 IETF LC End Date: 20171024 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 1.1 page 3: please upgrade th

[Gen-art] 2119 section and RFC 8174

2017-10-09 Thread Francis Dupont
RFC 8174 (Ambiguity of Uppercase vs Lowercase in RFC 2119 Key Words) published in May solved the lower case 2119 keyword issue but should we recommend draft authors to use the RFC 8174 updated standard section about the use of 2119 keywords? IMHO yes at it is the simplest. Note the RFC Editor

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sidrops-bgpsec-rollover-02.txt

2017-10-09 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-bgpsec-rollover-02.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20171007 IETF LC End Date: 20171017 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: IMHO the language itself

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-curdle-pkix-06.txt

2017-10-09 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-curdle-pkix-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20171002 IETF LC End Date: 20171009 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 11 p

[Gen-art] review of draft-dawkins-iesg-nomcom-advisor-iaoc-03.txt

2017-10-09 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-dawkins-iesg-nomcom-advisor-iaoc-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170929 IETF LC End Date: 20171016 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 7

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-taps-transports-usage-udp-06.txt

2017-09-15 Thread Francis Dupont
see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-taps-transports-usage-udp-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2017-09-14 IETF LC End Date: done IESG Telechat date: 2017-09-14 Summary: In the Right Track Major issues: None Minor

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-taps-transports-usage-udp-06

2017-09-14 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review result: On the Right Track I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-03.txt

2017-07-11 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170710 IETF LC End Date: 20170718 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 2 page 3 (twice) and 2.1

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-lsp-fastreroute-09.txt

2017-07-08 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-lsp-fastreroute-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170706 IETF LC End Date: 20170707 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC

[Gen-art] review of draft-bormann-hybi-ws-wk-00.txt

2017-07-03 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-bormann-hybi-ws-wk-00.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170626 IETF LC End Date: 20170719 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2: Acknowledg

[Gen-art] draft-ietf-sacm-requirements-15.txt

2017-06-11 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-sacm-requirements-15.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170607 IETF LC End Date: 20170605 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Almost Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: ambiguous uses of lowercase keywords: RFC 2119 i

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sipcore-name-addr-guidance-01.txt

2017-06-06 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-sipcore-name-addr-guidance-01.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170601 IETF LC End Date: 20170601 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 2 and 3

[Gen-art] review of draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-05.txt

2017-05-17 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-05.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170516 IETF LC End Date: 20170515 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready with Nits Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 1

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dprive-dtls-and-tls-profiles-09.txt

2017-05-10 Thread Francis Dupont
see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dprive-dtls-and-tls-profiles-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170509 IETF LC End Date: 20170302 IESG Telechat date: 20170511 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/edi

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dhc-relay-server-security-03

2017-04-15 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-tcp-encaps-08.txt

2017-03-19 Thread Francis Dupont
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-tcp-encaps-08.txt Reviewer: F

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dmm-lma-controlled-mag-params-03.txt

2017-02-27 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dmm-lma-controlled-mag-params-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170217 IETF LC End Date: 20170224 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2

[Gen-art] Review of draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-03

2017-02-15 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] review of draft-kivinen-802-15-ie-04.txt

2017-02-15 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-kivinen-802-15-ie-04.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170210 IETF LC End Date: 20170214 IESG Telechat date: 20170224 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 1 and 3 page 3

[Gen-art] review of draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-02.txt

2017-01-24 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-02.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170121 IETF LC End Date: 20170214 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Not Ready Major issues: this document is not understable at all without a previous reading of R

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-bmwg-ipv6-nd-04.txt

2017-01-24 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipv6-nd-04.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170116 IETF LC End Date: 20170123 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready with nits Major issues: none Minor issues: the title (and the Abstract) is a bit misl

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-16

2017-01-21 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review result: Ready draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-14 already reviewed for Last Call and the few nits were addressed in newer versions. ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-14.txt

2017-01-09 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-14.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170106 IETF LC End Date: 2017012 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready with Nits Major issues: None Minor issues: please consider to publish this as a B

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-trill-directory-assist-mechanisms-10.txt

2017-01-09 Thread Francis Dupont
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-trill-directory-assist-mechanisms-10.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170105 IETF LC End Date: 2017019 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 1.1

[Gen-art] review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-received-realm-08.txt

2016-11-09 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-holmberg-dispatch-received-realm-08.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20161103 IETF LC End Date: 20161123 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Almost Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: the wording should be improved by a

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch-03.txt

2016-10-26 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20161025 IETF LC End Date: 20161019 IESG Telechat date: 20161027 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 1 page 3: w

[Gen-art] review of draft-murchison-nntp-compress-05.txt

2016-09-26 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-murchison-nntp-compress-05.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20160922 IETF LC End Date: 20161010 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and A p

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-core-http-mapping-13.txt

2016-08-31 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-core-http-mapping-13.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20160829 IETF LC End Date: 20160822 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1:

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-mmusic-mux-exclusive-08.txt

2016-07-11 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-mux-exclusive-08.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20160707 IETF LC End Date: 20160708 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 4.4 page 5

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-trill-irb-13.txt

2016-06-22 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-trill-irb-13.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20160618 IETF LC End Date: 20160624 IESG Telechat date: 20150630 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - you have 6 (with a soft

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06.txt

2016-05-08 Thread Francis Dupont
In your previous mail you wrote: > > The authors are in California. You will not see their response until > > after the IESG meeting. => they are editorial comments: in the worst case they'll be handled by the RFC Editor... Thanks francis.dup...@fdupont.fr

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06.txt

2016-05-04 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20160429 IETF LC End Date: 20160429 IESG Telechat date: 20160505 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-pals-seamless-vccv-02.txt

2016-04-05 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-pals-seamless-vccv-02.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20160331 IETF LC End Date: 20160405 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - in ToC page 2 a

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-avtext-sdes-hdr-ext-05.txt

2016-03-24 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-avtext-sdes-hdr-ext-05.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20160319 IETF LC End Date: 20160318 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Spelling: - ToC

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-httpbis-alt-svc-12.txt

2016-02-29 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-alt-svc-12.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20160226 IETF LC End Date: 20160224 IESG Telechat date: 20160303 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC 3 and B p

[Gen-art] review of draft-mahesh-mef-urn-01.txt

2016-02-01 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-mahesh-mef-urn-01.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2016-01-25 IETF LC End Date: 2016-02-04 IESG Telechat date: 2016-02-04 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - I was first su

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc5203-bis-09.txt

2015-12-24 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-hip-rfc5203-bis-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20151218 IETF LC End Date: 20151228 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 2 page 3: (comme

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08.txt

2015-11-18 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20151112 IETF LC End Date: 20151117 IESG Telechat date: 20151203 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: (very

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-09.txt

2015-10-27 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20151026 IETF LC End Date: 20151023 IESG Telechat date: 20151119 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 3 and D p

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-cdni-media-type-03.txt

2015-10-07 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-cdni-media-type-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20151002 IETF LC End Date: 20151013 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - In 1 page 2: th

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-bess-spbm-evpn-01.txt

2015-09-28 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bess-spbm-evpn-01.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150925 IETF LC End Date: 20150924 IESG Telechat date: 20151001 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1: my

[Gen-art] review of draft-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey-11.txt

2015-09-14 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey-11.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150911 IETF LC End Date: 20150923 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34.txt

2015-09-02 Thread Francis Dupont
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150828 IETF LC End Date: 20150824 IESG Telechat date: 20150903 Summary: Almost Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: This document uses and even redefines RF

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-active-leasequery-03.txt

2015-07-06 Thread Francis Dupont
-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150701 IETF LC End Date: 20150629 IESG Telechat date: 20150709 Summary: Almost Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: the TLS part is a bit underspecified (nothing critical as the missing text should get a quick and easy consensus) Nits/editorial

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun-06.txt

2015-05-17 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150515 IETF LC End Date: 20150513 IESG Telechat date: 20150514?? Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I reviewed the 06 version. - 1 page 3: signalling - signaling - 4.1 page 5: after the terminology section

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-scim-api-16.txt

2015-04-22 Thread Francis Dupont
: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150418 IETF LC End Date: 20150420 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready with nits Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: many! - Abstract page 1: a standardized services: either 'a standardized service' or 'standardized services

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-httpauth-digest-15.txt

2015-04-06 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150402 IETF LC End Date: 20150402 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I reviewed the 15 version but I can see the 16 one is already available so I'll try to update my comments. - first I

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-09.txt

2015-03-22 Thread Francis Dupont
-signaling-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150313 IETF LC End Date: 20150318 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I read the 09 version but was too busy to prepare the IETF meeting to send these few comments. Note I

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-stox-im-12.txt

2015-03-04 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150226 IETF LC End Date: 20150302 IESG Telechat date: 20150305 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and Appendix A page 11: Acknowledgements - Acknowledgments - 1 page 2: even its meaning is obvious

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-mif-mpvd-arch-09.txt

2015-02-16 Thread Francis Dupont
: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150212 IETF LC End Date: 20150206 IESG Telechat date: 20150219 Summary: Almost Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: the authentication in DHCPv6 (RFC 3315 section 21) is considered in the document as a strong authentication. I have to disagree

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-teas-lsp-attribute-ro-02.txt

2015-02-16 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150213 IETF LC End Date: 20150218 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready with nits Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: There are a heavy use of abbrevs. Note abbrevs are registered under http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-mif-mpvd-arch-10.txt

2015-02-16 Thread Francis Dupont
-10.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150213 IETF LC End Date: 20150206 IESG Telechat date: 20150219 Summary: Ready with issues Please look at my preceeding message about draft-ietf-mif-mpvd-arch-09.txt for the minor issue and editorial comments. Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-acceptown-community-09.txt

2015-02-09 Thread Francis Dupont
-acceptown-community-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150206 IETF LC End Date: 20141208 IESG Telechat date: 20150205 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1: VRF and PE are not well known abbrevs (cf http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ccamp-general-constraint-encode-16.txt

2015-01-14 Thread Francis Dupont
-encode-16.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150107 IETF LC End Date: 20150117 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - you use a strange indentation for sub sections... Perhaps it is from the tempate?? Anyway

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07.txt

2014-12-31 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20141224 IETF LC End Date: 20141224 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: 5 page 4: in its lower layer should provide this the term should is ambiguous, i.e., either it is a keyword

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mibs-to-ieee80231-01.txt

2014-11-07 Thread Francis Dupont
.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20141104 IETF LC End Date: 20141106 IESG Telechat date: 20141125 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 7 page 5: Acknowledgements - Acknowledgments (BTW what is the favorite spelling in Canada: UK

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-mpls-ipv6-only-gap-03.txt

2014-10-29 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20141025 IETF LC End Date: 20141027 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 5 page 18: Acknowledgements - Acknowledgments - 3.2.6 page 8: singaling - signaling - 3.3.1 page 9

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-softwire-map-10.txt

2014-10-10 Thread Francis Dupont
: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20141009 IETF LC End Date: 20141010 IESG Telechat date: 20141016 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: First please note I participated to Softwire WG work so it is possible the document is not understantable by someone who has

[Gen-art] second/independent view on draft-ietf-softwire-map-10.txt

2014-10-10 Thread Francis Dupont
I reviewed the draft-ietf-softwire-map-10.txt document but I was too involved in Softwire stuff to be able to judge whether the text is understable without prior knowledge. Can someone from the team look at it and summary in the list? Thanks francis.dup...@fdupont.fr

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-forces-packet-parallelization-02.txt

2014-10-01 Thread Francis Dupont
-02.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20140930 IETF LC End Date: 20140929 IESG Telechat date: 20141002 Summary: Ready with nits Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1: the FE abbrev should be introduced (in particular one can believe it means

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-appsawg-multimailbox-search-01.txt

2014-07-21 Thread Francis Dupont
In your previous mail you wrote: Thanks, Francis, for the review. first a meta-question: should this kind of documents refer to its parent, RFC 6237 (same subject but RFC 6237 is Experimental, the I-D is for Standards Track)? IMHO it should not (so the I-D is right) because

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-appsawg-multimailbox-search-01.txt

2014-07-20 Thread Francis Dupont
.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20140717 IETF LC End Date: 20140721 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: first a meta-question: should this kind of documents refer to its parent, RFC 6237 (same subject but RFC 6237

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-reqs-11.txt

2014-07-16 Thread Francis Dupont
In your previous mail you wrote: - 3 3.7 (twice), 3.11 page 4 and 4 4.3 page 6: need - needs i believe that x need not do y is correct, so will leave it to the rfced if you will indulge = you are the native English writer (:-). Anyway the RFC Editor could fix it if needed... - 3

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-reqs-11.txt

2014-07-09 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20140703 IETF LC End Date: 20140703 IESG Telechat date: 20140710 Summary: Ready for nits Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1 and 1 page 2: only BGP is a well known abbrev, AS or RPKI are not, now it is only a formal

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4843-bis-06

2014-06-25 Thread Francis Dupont
but in this particular use case it doesn't matter. To finish the Orchid v1 (RFC4843) uses an Encode_100 with the middle 100 bits. Regards Francis Dupont fdup...@isc.org PS (*): RFC5201bis misses the 128 bit Context ID in the hash input so there is already a conflict. PPS for Julien: at line 289 OLD

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rtsp-nat-21.txt

2014-06-25 Thread Francis Dupont
In your previous mail you wrote: Dear Francis, I've done the changes, but I need some more information: 4.2 page 9 (connection-address): (ambiguous wording) ... An IP address SHOULD be used, but an FQDN MAY be used in place of an IP address. [JIG] I'm not getting

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rtsp-nat-21.txt

2014-06-23 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20140620 IETF LC End Date: 20140620 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None (a metacomment anyway: with the arrival of IPv6 we should not spend too much time/effort on NAT traversal...) Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-6man-multicast-scopes-05.txt

2014-06-02 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20140530 IETF LC End Date: 20140530 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: (only editorial stuff in the case they are not caught by the RFC Editor) - 2 NEW page 4: contraint - constraint

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-esp-ah-reqts-07.txt

2014-05-05 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20140428 IETF LC End Date: 20140503 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - in Toc page 2 and 6 (title) page 8: Acknowledgements - Acknowledgments - 5 page 8: compability - compatibility

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