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Document: draft-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib-15
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Jun-23-2014
IETF LC End Date: Jun-30-2014
IESG Telechat date: Not known.
This document is ready as a Proposed Standard.
A couple of nits can be fixed; more information below.
Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits: 2
Nits
- S4, third paragraph:
s/and secondly on identification, context/on identification, and
context/
- S5.4, third paragraph: spacing appears to be off since the relation-
ships appear distended to the left, beyond the margin.
Thanks,
- vijay
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Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA)
Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / vijay.gurb...@alcatel-lucent.com
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