Thanks again for your reviews on this and other documents, Peter!
Jari
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Hi, Peter, and thanks for the review.
> Page 2, Section 2, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: change “case by case” to
> “case-by-case”.
I'm embarrassed by that, because I'm usually careful about it. I
think I must have done some rephrasing (from "do it case by case" to
"do it on a case-by-case
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