Thanks Paul. We'll try to clarify those points in the text, so I
won't comment in detail on your comments. I can see how your questions
arise for a newcomer to GRASP, so they do need to be answered. It will
take a little while to do this, so the AD will defer the draft to a
later telechat.
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