Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4843-bis-06

2014-06-25 Thread Suresh Krishnan
Hi Francis, On 06/25/2014 04:24 AM, Francis Dupont wrote: > Suresh Krishnan writes: > >> Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a Proposed >> Standard but I have a comment you might wish to address. >> * Section 2 >> >> The Encode_96 function mentions that the output is obtained by

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4843-bis-06

2014-06-25 Thread Julien Laganier
On Jun 25, 2014, at 1:24 AM, Francis Dupont wrote: > Suresh Krishnan writes: > >> Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a Proposed >> Standard but I have a comment you might wish to address. >> * Section 2 >> >> The Encode_96 function mentions that the output is obtained by >>

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4843-bis-06

2014-06-25 Thread Francis Dupont
Suresh Krishnan writes: > Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a Proposed > Standard but I have a comment you might wish to address. > * Section 2 > > The Encode_96 function mentions that the output is obtained by > "extracting the middle 96-bit long bitstring" from the argument

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4843-bis-06

2014-06-24 Thread Suresh Krishnan
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewerfor this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Docu