Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-04

2020-04-23 Thread Alissa Cooper
Christer, thanks for your review. Balázs, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Apr 16, 2020, at 12:46 PM, Christer Holmberg > wrote: > > Hi Bala'zs, > > The modified text you suggest addresses my issue. > > Thanks! > > Regards, > > Christer > > > On

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-04

2020-04-16 Thread Balázs Varga A
Hi Christer, No, data plane specification does not cover what protocols are used by service sub-layer and forwarding sub-layer functions. A data plane specification specifies what headers fields are there in the packet and how to use these header fields for a specific purpose. For instance, in

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-04

2020-04-15 Thread Christer Holmberg
Hi Bala'zs, Thank you for the reply and clarifications. I still have a question on Q2. ... Q2: >> The first line of the 2nd paragraph of the Introduction says: >> >> “This document describes the concepts needed by any DetNet data plane specification…” >> >>

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-04

2020-04-15 Thread Balázs Varga A
Hi Christer, Thanks for your review. Replies/comments inline marked with . We are working on an updated version of the draft to incorporate your comments as well. Thanks Bala'zs -Original Message- From: Christer Holmberg via Datatracker Sent: Sunday, March 15, 2020 11:29 AM To:

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-04

2020-03-15 Thread Christer Holmberg via Datatracker
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For