Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-targeted-cache-control-02

2021-12-24 Thread Mark Nottingham
Hi Elwyn, Thanks for the review; responses below. > On 24 Dec 2021, at 1:41 am, Elwyn Davies via Datatracker > wrote: > > s2.3, para 4: The infomational reference [AGE-PENALTY] is not a publically > available document. This is not a vital reference and I expect that people > trying to build

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-targeted-cache-control-02

2021-12-23 Thread Elwyn Davies via Datatracker
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more