Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-clarify-03

[Alissa Cooper]

Brian, thanks for your review. Randy, thanks for your response. I entered a No 
Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Jul 30, 2018, at 10:09 PM, Brian E Carpenter  
> wrote:
> 
> On 31/07/2018 13:35, Randy Bush wrote:
>> thanks for review!
>> 
>>> Title would be more searchworthy if it read "BGP-4 Origin Validation 
>>> Clarifications"
>> 
>> ok.  how about "BGP-4 RPKI-Based Origin Validation Clarifications?"
> 
> Sure
> 
>   Brian
> 
>> 
>>> Abstract:  s/\"/./
>> 
>> whoopsie.
>> 
>> will keep new xml in in emacs buffer until all reviews are in
>> 
>> randy
>> 
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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-clarify-03

[Brian E Carpenter]

On 31/07/2018 13:35, Randy Bush wrote:
> thanks for review!
> 
>> Title would be more searchworthy if it read "BGP-4 Origin Validation 
>> Clarifications"
> 
> ok.  how about "BGP-4 RPKI-Based Origin Validation Clarifications?"

Sure

   Brian

> 
>> Abstract:  s/\"/./
> 
> whoopsie.
> 
> will keep new xml in in emacs buffer until all reviews are in
> 
> randy
> 

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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-clarify-03

[Randy Bush]

thanks for review!

> Title would be more searchworthy if it read "BGP-4 Origin Validation 
> Clarifications"

ok.  how about "BGP-4 RPKI-Based Origin Validation Clarifications?"

> Abstract:  s/\"/./

whoopsie.

will keep new xml in in emacs buffer until all reviews are in

randy

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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-clarify-03

[Brian Carpenter]

Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review result: Ready with Nits

Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-clarify-03

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Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-clarify-03.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2018-07-31
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-10
IESG Telechat date: 

Summary: Ready


Comments: Clear & easy to understand
-

Nits:
-

Title would be more searchworthy if it read "BGP-4 Origin Validation 
Clarifications"

Abstract:  s/\"/./

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