Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-bbf-bbf-urn-02

2016-12-01 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for the review & the edits. jari On 24 Nov 2016, at 02:24, Joel Halpern wrote: > The new version addresses my concerns and is ready for publication as an > informational RFC. > > Yours, > Joel M. Halpern > > On 10/14/16 4:51 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: >> I am

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-bbf-bbf-urn-02

2016-11-23 Thread Joel Halpern
The new version addresses my concerns and is ready for publication as an informational RFC. Yours, Joel M. Halpern On 10/14/16 4:51 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-bbf-bbf-urn-02

2016-10-27 Thread Joel M. Halpern
Thanks Barbarra. With regard to the assignment process text, what you have would work. I would suggest dropping the text about membership and simply talking about going through the BBF document creation and approval process. Yours, Joel On 10/27/16 12:53 PM, STARK, BARBARA H wrote: Hi

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-bbf-bbf-urn-02

2016-10-27 Thread STARK, BARBARA H
Hi Joel, > Major issues: > RFC 3406 states that the namespace considerations section should indicate > why a new namespace is needed. While this is pretty obvious, the text does > not actually say anything in that section to explain it. > In particular, I would expect that section to

[Gen-art] Review: draft-bbf-bbf-urn-02

2016-10-14 Thread Joel M. Halpern
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