I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-simple-partial-publish-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2007-10-16 IETF LC End Date: none IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Comments: only minor editorial stuff which should be handled by the RFC editor (i.e., please don't rush to your keyboard :-): - Abstract page 2: to constitue is not in my dicts (even I understand well the term?) - TOC page 2 and 7 page 13: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1 page 3: presentity is not in my dicts too but IMHO it doesn't matter as it is well introduced - 3.1 page 4: expilicitly -> explicitly - 4.2 page 6: precedures -> procedures - 4.3 page 7: dependant -> dependent - 8.2 page 14: to Presence -> to Presence Regards [EMAIL PROTECTED] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
