Summary: basically ready with nits
I strongly recommend to convert the document to a tool like xml2rfc
before to send it to the RFC editor!
Other concerns:
- the document should specify which kind of namespace registration is
asked for (I've assume "formal")
- so there must be an IANA consideration asking for the registration
- and compliance to RFC 3406 should be more evident (i.e., stressed)
- note that I am not in urn-nid ML so I don't know if this step of
the procedure was done nor if there were interesting comments...
(I've checked the urn-nid archive, the procedure was followed
in a burial silence (:-), only Leslie Daigle helped the author)
- 2.2 page 2: the declared registrant should be an organization
and the human the contact person for obvius stability reasons
- 2.22 page 3: un -> and
- Acknowledgments page 5: there is only one author who should not be
acknowledged (:-)
- 7.1 page 5: perhaps the RFC 2141 should be referenced
- 7.2 [3] page 5: misplaced closing "
- 7.2 [7] page 5: where are the acknowlegdments to see?
Regards
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