Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-06

Hi Dale, Thank you for your review, I appreciate it. Please see inline. At 6:32 PM -0800 2/17/17, Dale Worley wrote: Reviewer: Dale Worley Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-06

I am almost done with my reply. I wasn't ignoring Dale, I've been working on his comments. At 11:28 PM + 2/21/17, Natasha Rooney wrote: Hi Dale! Many thanks for these comments, as one of the SLIM chairs I'll work on getting some answers to you or I'll request the author or one of the

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ippm-6man-pdm-option: Server Time

Jouni, Here is the thread for your second major comment: Major comment #2 from you: >2) The PDM option relation to actual "server" time is somewhat confusing and >the 5-tuple does not allow me to detect the real relationship between the >>server/application action that caused the generation

[Gen-art] Fw: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ippm-6man-pdm-option: Server Time

I don't know why this email keeps getting cut off! I am attaching my response in a text file. Sigh. Thanks, Nalini ElkinsInside Products, Inc.www.insidethestack.com(831) 659-8360 - Forwarded Message - From: "nalini.elk...@insidethestack.com" To:

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-trill-rfc6439bis-04

Hi Christer, Version -05 of the draft, which was just posted, is intended to resolve your comments. Thanks, Donald === Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e...@gmail.com On Thu, Jan 19, 2017 at 7:47 AM,

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-09

Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-bmwg-ipv6-nd-04.txt

Francis, Thanks for the careful review. Can you suggest a better title? Ron P.S. I have worked the other comments into the next version of the draft. > -Original Message- > From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Cerveny, Bill