[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-20.txt

2019-07-01 Thread Francis Dupont
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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-enterprise-pa-multihoming-08

2019-07-01 Thread Jen Linkova
Hi Pete, Thanks for reviewing the draft - not the shortest one...;) On Wed, Jun 5, 2019 at 1:42 AM Pete Resnick via Datatracker wrote: > I found this overall to be an excellent document with clear technical > explanations that even an upper-layer knucklehead like me could understand. > However,

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-enterprise-pa-multihoming-08

2019-07-01 Thread Pete Resnick
Hi Jen, Thanks for the reply, and the new draft. Some comments, inline: On 1 Jul 2019, at 10:24, Jen Linkova wrote: Throughout, but particularly in section 5, this document refers to "hosts" doing address selection. To be fair, so does RFC 6724, but 6724 is referring to *default* address