Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-l3sm-l3vpn-service-model-17

[stephane.litkowski]

Hi Brian,

I missed this point in my updates. Sorry for that, next version will take it 
into account.

Brgds,


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From: Brian E Carpenter [mailto:brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com] 
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Subject: Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-l3sm-l3vpn-service-model-17

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Document: draft-ietf-l3sm-l3vpn-service-model-17.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2016-10-21
IETF LC End Date: 2016-10-11
IESG Telechat date: 2016-10-27

Summary: Almost ready


Comments:
-

Thanks for responding to my LC comments. I have not checked the details of the 
yang.

Minor Issues:
-

This is a point I missed originally but I mentioned it during the discussion:
The model says:

  | | |   | | +--rw match-flow
  | | |   | |   +--rw dscp?inet:dscp
  | | |   | |   +--rw tos? uint8

but tos was obsoleted when dscp was defined by RFC 2474. I don't think you 
should include tos. You don't mention ECN, which are the two bits from tos that 
are not included in dscp. Those bits are no good for flow matching because they 
are variable.  If an operator tries to use the 8 TOS bits for flow matching but 
a user supports ECN, the matching will not work consistently. So I think it's 
misleading to include this.

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[Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-l3sm-l3vpn-service-model-17

[Brian E Carpenter]

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-l3sm-l3vpn-service-model-17.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2016-10-21
IETF LC End Date: 2016-10-11
IESG Telechat date: 2016-10-27

Summary: Almost ready


Comments:
-

Thanks for responding to my LC comments. I have not checked the details of the 
yang.

Minor Issues:
-

This is a point I missed originally but I mentioned it during the discussion:
The model says:

  | | |   | | +--rw match-flow
  | | |   | |   +--rw dscp?inet:dscp
  | | |   | |   +--rw tos? uint8

but tos was obsoleted when dscp was defined by RFC 2474. I don't think
you should include tos. You don't mention ECN, which are the two bits
from tos that are not included in dscp. Those bits are no good for flow
matching because they are variable.  If an operator tries to use the 8 TOS
bits for flow matching but a user supports ECN, the matching will not work
consistently. So I think it's misleading to include this.

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