[JORGE] fixed
s4.4.3, last para: s/Interface-ful with SBD IRB model/Interface-ful with
unnumbered SBD IRB model/. PS This paragraph does not appear to add value -
I
assume it is there to some extent for symmetry with ss4.4.1.and 4.4.2.
[JORGE] fixed
s6, para 3: s/any action/any action
s6, para 3: s/any action/any actions/ or maybe, s/any action that end up/any
action that ends up/
[JORGE] fixed
s7: This should be redrafted as a request for allocation rather than a
report
of a previous action. The current allocation is temporary.
[JORGE] fixed
s8.1: idn
Elwyn,
Thank you very much for your thorough review.
We addressed all your comments.. see below for more details, with [JORGE].
Thx
Jorge
-Original Message-
From: Elwyn Davies
Date: Saturday, April 14, 2018 at 12:59 PM
To: "gen-art@ietf.org"
Cc: "draft-ietf-bess-evpn-prefix-advertise
Elwyn, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot and pointed to
your review there.
Alissa
> On Apr 14, 2018, at 6:59 AM, Elwyn Davies wrote:
>
> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review result: Almost Ready
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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