Re: [Gen-art] [Softwires] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang-06

[Alissa Cooper]

Roni, thanks for your reviews. Ian, thanks for your responses. I entered a 
DISCUSS ballot concerning the security considerations.

Best,
Alissa

> On Jan 7, 2019, at 7:42 AM, ianfar...@gmx.com wrote:
> 
> Hi Roni,
> 
> My apologies for the oversight. I’ve just posted -14 which includes the 
> RESTCONF reference in the Introduction.
> 
> Thanks,
> Ian
> 
>> On 9. Oct 2018, at 09:02, Roni Even > > wrote:
>> 
>> Reviewer: Roni Even
>> Review result: Ready with Nits
>> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
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>> .
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>> Document: draft-ietf-softwire-yang-??
>> Reviewer: Roni Even
>> Review Date: 2018-10-08
>> IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-11
>> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>> 
>> Summary:
>> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits
>> 
>> Major issues:
>> 
>> Minor issues:
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> 1. In section 1 it says that the YANG data model can be used with netconf , I
>> noticed that restconf is only mentioned in the security section as network
>> management. why not add restconf to introduction?
>> 
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Re: [Gen-art] [Softwires] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang-06

[ianfarrer]

Hi Roni,

My apologies for the oversight. I’ve just posted -14 which includes the 
RESTCONF reference in the Introduction.

Thanks,
Ian

> On 9. Oct 2018, at 09:02, Roni Even  wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> 
> .
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-softwire-yang-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2018-10-08
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-11
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 1. In section 1 it says that the YANG data model can be used with netconf , I
> noticed that restconf is only mentioned in the security section as network
> management. why not add restconf to introduction?
> 
> 
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Re: [Gen-art] [Softwires] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang-06

[ianfarrer]

Hi Roni,

I’ll add that for the next version.

Thanks,
Ian

> On 9. Oct 2018, at 09:02, Roni Even  wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> 
> .
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-softwire-yang-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2018-10-08
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-11
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 1. In section 1 it says that the YANG data model can be used with netconf , I
> noticed that restconf is only mentioned in the security section as network
> management. why not add restconf to introduction?
> 
> 
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