Meral, thanks for the review and spotting those NITS. I've corrected the draft accordingly, the changes will be part of a -05 revision which should be out in the coming day.
best, Alex On Wed, Apr 4, 2018 at 12:42 AM, Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > > > Document: draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04 > > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > > Review Date: 2018-04-03 > > IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-04 > > IESG Telechat date: NA > > > > > > Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Experimental RFC but I have > comments. > > > > Major issues: > > > > Minor issues: > > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > [Page 3], Section 3 nits: > > "(eg. "---->"(e.g. " > > "signifcantly"---->"significantly" > > "octects"---->"octets" > > > > [Page 5], Section 4.4 nits: > > "transction"---->"transaction" > > > > [Page 5], Section 5 nits: > > "octects."---->"octets." > > > > > > > > > > Best Regards, > > Meral > > --- > > Meral Shirazipour > > Ericsson > > Research > > www.ericsson.com _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
