Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-08

2019-02-07 Thread Joel M. Halpern
Thank you Janos. I have looked at the changes. They address my concerns, and make a number of other useful and consistent changes that improve the document readability and clarity. Yours, Joel On 2/6/19 5:17 PM, János Farkas wrote: Hi Joel, Thank you very much again for your review! The

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-08

2019-02-06 Thread Joel M. Halpern
Thanks Janos. I will take a look at it promptly. Yours, Joel On 2/6/19 5:17 PM, János Farkas wrote: Hi Joel, Thank you very much again for your review! The draft had multiple updates since v08 you reviewed. The latest revision is v 11:

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-08

2018-10-22 Thread János Farkas
Hi Pascal, Thank you for your comment! There was another comment pointing out that the text I suggested is misleading. Instead, I suggest the following update: OLD: In general, a trivial priority-based queuing scheme will give better average latency to a data flow than DetNet, but of

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-08

2018-10-22 Thread Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
Hello János I's change reasonably to strictly. The whole point of bounded in detnet is that it is not a vague boundary but a hard, guaranteed one, regardless of any other activity in the network. All the best, Pascal > -Original Message- > From: János Farkas > Sent: vendredi 19

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-08

2018-10-19 Thread János Farkas
Joel, Please see in-line. On 10/19/2018 9:17 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: Thank you Janos.  Two clarifications under retained text, with the rest elided. Yours, Joel On 10/19/18 3:10 PM, János Farkas wrote: ... On 9/22/2018 2:59 AM, Joel Halpern wrote: ... Minor issues: Section 3.1

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-08

2018-10-19 Thread Joel M. Halpern
Thank you Janos. Two clarifications under retained text, with the rest elided. Yours, Joel On 10/19/18 3:10 PM, János Farkas wrote: ... On 9/22/2018 2:59 AM, Joel Halpern wrote: ... Minor issues: Section 3.1 states that worst case delay for priority queueing is unbounded. That

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-08

2018-10-19 Thread János Farkas
Hi Joel, Thank you very much for your review! Please find below in-line responses and how we plan to update the draft to resolve your comments. Best regards, Janos On 9/22/2018 2:59 AM, Joel Halpern wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART