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On 01/13/2016 09:13 AM, Dirkjan Ochtman wrote:
> In part, this is because Apache 2.4 overhauls some often-used parts
> of the configuration; chances that you will have to make some
> changes to your configuration are quite high. On the other hand,
> apache-2.4.18 includes support for HTTP 2.0, so you get that
> (almost) for free!
>
> Rather than trying to enumerate all the differences here, we'd like
> to point you to the upstream upgrading document, which can be found
> here:
I would change this to:
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With this comes changes to configuration that will likely need
attention. Upstream's upgrading document outlines any major
configuration changes that may be necessary when upgrading. It can be
found at:
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The reason I suggest cutting it a little is because the HTTP 2.0 mention
comes, and then right after there was the "rather than enumerate the
changes..." part. If HTTP 2.0 is listed among the changes on Apache's
upgrade guide, it's redundant to put it in the news item.
Also, tone. Maybe I'm wrong in thinking this, but generally I think news
should be neutral and absent of "you" and "we", if possible. The primary
impact here is configurations may need changing, and instead of creating
a massive news item with all the changes, we're just referring to
upstream's extant documentation, which is a good call. I just feel the
tone should be a bit more "keep it to the facts". Otherwise, it looks
good to me. :)
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