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commit ffcf14473d551f034aea40213d2eeb17861850be
Author: Nate Drake <nate.dr...@gmx.com>
Date:   Mon Oct 30 07:20:28 2017 -0700

    Wiki page start changed with summary [] by Nate Drake
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@@ -10,11 +10,11 @@
 
 {{  :shot-enlightenment.png?nolink&320}}
 
-[[:about-enlightenment|Enlightenment]] started as a project to build a Window 
Manager for X11. That was way back in 1996. It has grown much since. It still 
produces this Window Manager, but it has evolved to also cover Mobile, Wearable 
and TV UI needs for projects such as [[http://www.tizen.org|Tizen]] as well as 
the traditional "desktop" UI. We still push out releases, so see our 
[[:download|download]] page for more details on the latest releases, or see our 
[[contrib/|contribute]] page [...]
+[[:about-enlightenment|Enlightenment]] started out way back in 1996 as a 
project to build a Window Manager for X11. It has grown much more since then. 
Enlightenment still produces this Window Manager, but it has evolved to also 
cover Mobile, Wearable and TV UI requirements for projects such as 
[[http://www.tizen.org|Tizen]] as well as the traditional "desktop" UI. We 
still push out releases. See our [[:download|download]] page for more details 
on the this. Visit our [[contrib/|contribute [...]
 
-It also is in the transition from [[http://www.x.org|X11]] to 
[[http://wayland.freedesktop.org|Wayland]]. We are fully committed to moving to 
Wayland eventually as this is definitely the future of the graphical display 
layer on Linux.
+The project is currently transitioning from [[http://www.x.org|X11]] to 
[[http://wayland.freedesktop.org|Wayland]]. We are fully committed to moving to 
Wayland eventually, as its the future of graphical display layers on Linux.
 
-We still primarily support Linux for Enlightenment, but there is some effort 
(based on help and support from users and some developers) to support the BSDs.
+We still primarily support Linux for Enlightenment, but there is some effort 
(based on help and support from users and some developers) to support BSD too.
 
 ----
 
@@ -22,11 +22,11 @@ We still primarily support Linux for Enlightenment, but 
there is some effort (ba
 
 {{  :diagram-block-efl.svg?nolink&320}}
 
-In the process of developing a Window Manager, A set of libraries were 
developed in order to achieve that goal. These libraries are known collectively 
as [[:about-efl|EFL]]. They cover a range of functionality from main-loop, to 
graphics, scene graphs, networking, widgets, data storage, IPC and much more.
+While developing the Window Manager, a set of libraries was also developed.. 
These libraries are known collectively as [[:about-efl|EFL]]. They cover a 
range of functionality from main-loop, to graphics, scene graphs, networking, 
widgets, data storage, IPC and much more.
 
-We now are starting to pull in bindings support directly into EFL. We are 
working on having bindings auto-generated for %%C++%%, Lua and Javascript 
(v8/node.js). We also would like to pull in our Python bindings in the future 
so we can support as many languages as possible and keep them up to date.
+We now are starting to pull in bindings support directly into EFL. We are 
working on auto-generated bindings for %%C++%%, Lua and Javascript 
(v8/node.js). We hope eventually to pull in our Python bindings too, so we can 
support as many languages as possible and keep them up to date.
 
-For our libraries, our primary development environment is Linux, but we make 
an effort to support the BSDs as fully as possible, as well as OSX and Windows.
+Our primary development environment is Linux, but we make an effort to support 
BSD as much as possible, as well as macOS and Windows.
 
 ----
 
@@ -34,17 +34,17 @@ For our libraries, our primary development environment is 
Linux, but we make an
 
 {{:shot-terminology.png?nolink&240  }}
 
-We eat our own dog food. We use our libraries not just to make 
[[:about-enlightenment|Enlightenment]] but to also make other applications for 
regular every-day use. We make these applications available for free.
+We use our libraries not only to make [[:about-enlightenment|Enlightenment]] 
but other applications for day to day use. We make these applications available 
for free.
 
 {{  :shot-rage.png?nolink&240}}
 
-We have some of the usual suspects like a [[:about-terminology|terminal 
emulator]], a [[:about-rage|video player]], an [[:about-ephoto|image viewer]], 
and even the start of [[:about-edi|an IDE]].
+We have included common features such as a [[:about-terminology|terminal 
emulator]], [[:about-rage|video player]], an [[:about-ephoto|image viewer]], 
and even the makings of [[:about-edi|an IDE]].
 
-Even [[http://www.tizen.org|native Tizen applications]] use EFL for their 
development because we have focused on remaining lean and still featureful. 
Unlike many traditional toolkits, we have based ourselves around a scene graph 
from the ground up, making EFL very different in nature, yet allowing us to 
seamlessly switch from software rendering to OpenGL or any other mechanism that 
can be put in a render engine for the canvas scene graph engine we call Evas, 
as well as layer widgets and  [...]
+[[http://www.tizen.org|Native Tizen applications]] are developed using EFL. 
This is because we've focused on remaining lean, yet feature-rich. Unlike many 
traditional toolkits, EFL is based around a scene graph from the ground up. 
This allows us to seamlessly switch from software rendering to OpenGL or any 
other mechanism that can be put in a render engine for Evas the canvas scene 
graph engine. This also permits layer widgets and objects with alpha channels 
from the ground up without an [...]
 
 {{:shot-edi.png?nolink&240  }}
 
-This is by no means a complete list of applications, and we are not done 
making more. We may not have started the traditional way, but are building our 
library over time, and Tizen has another library brewing over there as well.
+This is by no means a complete list of applications and more are on the way. 
We may not have started the traditional way, but are building our library over 
time. Tizen also has a library of its own. 
 
 {{  :shot-2017-08-22_07-54-31.jpg?nolink&240|}}
 
@@ -52,21 +52,21 @@ This is by no means a complete list of applications, and we 
are not done making
 
 ==== Thanks to ====
 
-We run as an open source project, and have people to contribute because they 
like or want to, or perhaps because they are paid to, but the intent is to 
release everything under liberal open source licenses and not provide any 
restrictions to those using such works except at most the "share alike" clauses 
found in GPLv2 etc.
+We run as an open source project. People contribute because they like to or 
because they are paid. The intent is to release everything under liberal open 
source licenses with no restrictions on those using such works except the usual 
"share alike" clauses found in GPLv2 etc.
 
-We also have contributions in other ways. A community filing bug reports, as 
well as simple giving feedback, and also entities that help support us.
+We also receive other types of contributions. Our community files bug reports, 
as well as simply providing feedback. Other entities also support us. 
 
-This entire website runs on a machine bought by donations from developers and 
community. Donations can be made using [[https://bitcoin.org|Bitcoin]], 
[[https://flattr.com/thing/418692/Enlightenment|Flattr]] or 
[[https://www.paypal.com/fr/cgi-bin/webscr?cmd=_flow&SESSION=xq0En08Jejvis-FobL7gIcurPwSau2mb0NIiEt17thKeUiVXD8pnYQAeTXG&dispatch=5885d80a13c0db1f8e263663d3faee8d4fe1dd75ca3bd4f11d72275b28239088|PayPal]].
 We have a non-profit Enlightenment foundation based in France that acts as cu 
[...]
+This entire website runs on a machine bought with donations from developers 
and the community. Donations can be made using [[https://bitcoin.org|Bitcoin]], 
[[https://flattr.com/thing/418692/Enlightenment|Flattr]] or 
[[https://www.paypal.com/fr/cgi-bin/webscr?cmd=_flow&SESSION=xq0En08Jejvis-FobL7gIcurPwSau2mb0NIiEt17thKeUiVXD8pnYQAeTXG&dispatch=5885d80a13c0db1f8e263663d3faee8d4fe1dd75ca3bd4f11d72275b28239088|PayPal]].
 We have a non-profit Enlightenment foundation based in France, which ac [...]
 
 [[bitcoin>1KbHkZ6K6unQ9Rh3ZiM7Gk2xsYRLqSzPH3?label=Enlightenment 
Foundation&message=Thank you for your donation!|{{ :donate-bitcoin.png?direct 
|}}]]
 
-This server is hosted at [[https://osuosl.org/|OSUOSL]] who help many open 
source projects with infrastructure to help them keep running.
+This server is hosted at [[https://osuosl.org/|OSUOSL]] who use their 
infrastructure to keep many open source projects running.
 
-Our DNS is provided kindly by [[https://www.easydns.com/|EasyDNS]].
+Our DNS is kindly provided by [[https://www.easydns.com/|EasyDNS]].
 
 Our SSL certificates are provided by [[https://www.gandi.net|Gandi.net]].
 
-Many of our **Enlightenment Developer Days** events have been sponsored and 
paid for by [[https://www.samsung.com|Samsung]], and recently hosted by 
[[https://openwide.fr|Openwide]].
+Many of our **Enlightenment Developer Days** events have been sponsored and 
paid for by [[https://www.samsung.com|Samsung]]and have recently been hosted by 
[[https://openwide.fr|Openwide]].
 
 [[https://osuosl.org|{{:thanks-osuosl.svg|OSUOSL}}]]
 [[https://www.easydns.com|{{:thanks-easydns.svg|EasyDNS}}]]

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