Re: [PATCH 1/4] doc: add articles (grammar)

is (perhaps just adding the two "acks", or also replying to the suggestions), or just merging it as-is. -- Kristoffer Haugsbakk

Re: [PATCH 3/4] doc: make the intent of sentence clearer

something different than this. -- Kristoffer Haugsbakk

Re: [PATCH 1/4] doc: add articles (grammar)

hould add another header, or do something different than this. -- Kristoffer Haugsbakk

[PATCH 3/4] doc: make the intent of sentence clearer

e sense and the rest of the paragraph makes the intended meaning clear, this adjustment should make the intent of the sentence more immediately clear to the reader. Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <kristoffer.haugsb...@gmail.com> --- Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed,

[PATCH 4/4] doc: omit needless "for"

C Hamano suggested this approach instead. Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <kristoffer.haugsb...@gmail.com> --- Notes (kristoffers): The original patch was sent to the mailing list on 2016-11-04, and Junio replied with his suggested correction on 2016-11-10; see the cover le

[PATCH 0/4] doc: fixes to gitcore-tutorial.txt

patch "doc: omit needless "for"" is a follow-up to that, taking into consideration the feedback from Junio C Hamano and Jeff King. Kristoffer Haugsbakk (4): doc: add articles (grammar) doc: add verb in front of command to run doc: make the intent of sentenc

[PATCH 1/4] doc: add articles (grammar)

Add definite and indefinite articles in three places where they were missing. - Use "the" in front of a directory name - Use "the" in front of "style of cooperation" - Use an indefinite article in front of "CVS background" Signed-off-by: Kristoffer H

[PATCH 2/4] doc: add verb in front of command to run

Instead of using the command 'git clone' as a verb, use "run" as the verb indicating the action of executing the command 'git clone'. Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <kristoffer.haugsb...@gmail.com> --- Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertio

Re: [PATCH] doc: fill in omitted word

I agree. Just writing "... what the plumbing does ..." is clearer and less redundant. I'll probably be sending a patch series that includes your proposed fix sometime soon. -- Kristoffer Haugsbakk

[PATCH] doc: fill in omitted word

Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <kristoffer.haugsb...@gmail.com> --- Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt index 4546fa0..9860517