Re: [PATCH] wording fixes in the user manual and glossary

2014-05-26 Thread Ben Aveling
On 25/05/14 20:37, Jeremiah Mahler wrote: How about this: Eventually the upstream developer will do additional work in their repository. Creating new commits and advancing the branches to point at the new commits. The second sentence needs a verb. Maybe something along the lines o

Re: [PATCH] wording fixes in the user manual and glossary

2014-05-26 Thread Chris Packham
On 25/05/14 20:37, Jeremiah Mahler wrote: > On Sun, May 25, 2014 at 07:56:41PM +1200, Chris Packham wrote: >> On 25/05/14 15:50, Jeremiah Mahler wrote: >>> Some minor wording fixes in the user manual and glossary. > ... >>> >>> -Eventually the developer cloned from will do additional work in her

Re: [PATCH] wording fixes in the user manual and glossary

2014-05-25 Thread Jeremiah Mahler
On Sun, May 25, 2014 at 07:56:41PM +1200, Chris Packham wrote: > On 25/05/14 15:50, Jeremiah Mahler wrote: > > Some minor wording fixes in the user manual and glossary. ... > > > > -Eventually the developer cloned from will do additional work in her > > +Eventually the developer will do additiona

Re: [PATCH] wording fixes in the user manual and glossary

2014-05-25 Thread Chris Packham
On 25/05/14 15:50, Jeremiah Mahler wrote: > Some minor wording fixes in the user manual and glossary. > > Signed-off-by: Jeremiah Mahler > --- > Documentation/glossary-content.txt | 2 +- > Documentation/user-manual.txt | 8 > 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) > > d

[PATCH] wording fixes in the user manual and glossary

2014-05-24 Thread Jeremiah Mahler
Some minor wording fixes in the user manual and glossary. Signed-off-by: Jeremiah Mahler --- Documentation/glossary-content.txt | 2 +- Documentation/user-manual.txt | 8 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/glossary-content.txt b/Documentat