Re: [PATCH 4/7] Documentation: git-init: --separate-git-dir: clarify

2014-08-08 Thread Linus Arver
On Wed, Aug 06, 2014 at 10:35:31AM -0700, Junio C Hamano wrote:
 While I agree that it is a very good idea to state what it does,
 what it is for with the very first sentence of the paragraph,
 separate the git repository from your working tree does not say
 much more than the name of the option --separate-git-dir already
 tells the reader.

Ah, I see.

 And I do not offhand think of a better version
 (and obviously I didn't think of any when the current text was
 reviewed and committed).  The second sentence in your version is
 definitely an improvement over the first and the second sentences of
 the original (where it is supposed to be does not give any new
 information to those who don't know, and does not help those who
 already know).

OK.

 Perhaps we can simply remove the first sentence from your version?

Yes, I agree. I enjoy cutting excess verbiage.
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Re: [PATCH 4/7] Documentation: git-init: --separate-git-dir: clarify

2014-08-06 Thread Junio C Hamano
Linus Arver linusar...@gmail.com writes:

 On Tue, Aug 05, 2014 at 03:12:21PM -0700, Junio C Hamano wrote:
 Linus Arver linusar...@gmail.com writes:
 
  Signed-off-by: Linus Arver linusar...@gmail.com
  ---
 
 You would need to work on your justification skills ;-) in the log
 message.  What does this change clarify and in what way?

 Oops, sorry. I guess I should have written some more information in the
 commit message, something like this:

 Use shorter sentences to describe what actually happens. We describe
 what the term Git symbolic link actually means.

 Also, we separate out the description of the behavioral change upon
 reinitialization into its own paragraph.

Sounds very sensible.

   Documentation/git-init.txt | 12 ++--
   1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
 
  diff --git a/Documentation/git-init.txt b/Documentation/git-init.txt
  index f21b85b..bf0a7ae 100644
  --- a/Documentation/git-init.txt
  +++ b/Documentation/git-init.txt
  @@ -57,12 +57,12 @@ DIRECTORY section below.)
   
   --separate-git-dir=git dir::
   
  -Instead of initializing the repository where it is supposed to be,
  -place a filesytem-agnostic Git symbolic link there, pointing to the
  -specified path, and initialize a Git repository at the path. The
  -result is Git repository can be separated from working tree. If this
  -is reinitialization, the repository will be moved to the specified
  -path.
  +Separate the Git repository from your working tree.  Instead of 
  initializing the
  +repository as a directory to either `$GIT_DIR` or `./.git/`, create a 
  text file
  +there containing the path to the actual repository.  This file acts as
  +filesystem-agnostic Git symbolic link to the repository.

While I agree that it is a very good idea to state what it does,
what it is for with the very first sentence of the paragraph,
separate the git repository from your working tree does not say
much more than the name of the option --separate-git-dir already
tells the reader.  And I do not offhand think of a better version
(and obviously I didn't think of any when the current text was
reviewed and committed).  The second sentence in your version is
definitely an improvement over the first and the second sentences of
the original (where it is supposed to be does not give any new
information to those who don't know, and does not help those who
already know).

Perhaps we can simply remove the first sentence from your version?

  +If this is reinitialization, the repository will be moved to the 
  specified path.
   
   --shared[=(false|true|umask|group|all|world|everybody|0xxx)]::
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Re: [PATCH 4/7] Documentation: git-init: --separate-git-dir: clarify

2014-08-05 Thread Junio C Hamano
Linus Arver linusar...@gmail.com writes:

 Signed-off-by: Linus Arver linusar...@gmail.com
 ---

You would need to work on your justification skills ;-) in the log
message.  What does this change clarify and in what way?

  Documentation/git-init.txt | 12 ++--
  1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

 diff --git a/Documentation/git-init.txt b/Documentation/git-init.txt
 index f21b85b..bf0a7ae 100644
 --- a/Documentation/git-init.txt
 +++ b/Documentation/git-init.txt
 @@ -57,12 +57,12 @@ DIRECTORY section below.)
  
  --separate-git-dir=git dir::
  
 -Instead of initializing the repository where it is supposed to be,
 -place a filesytem-agnostic Git symbolic link there, pointing to the
 -specified path, and initialize a Git repository at the path. The
 -result is Git repository can be separated from working tree. If this
 -is reinitialization, the repository will be moved to the specified
 -path.
 +Separate the Git repository from your working tree.  Instead of initializing 
 the
 +repository as a directory to either `$GIT_DIR` or `./.git/`, create a text 
 file
 +there containing the path to the actual repository.  This file acts as
 +filesystem-agnostic Git symbolic link to the repository.
 ++
 +If this is reinitialization, the repository will be moved to the specified 
 path.
  
  --shared[=(false|true|umask|group|all|world|everybody|0xxx)]::
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Re: [PATCH 4/7] Documentation: git-init: --separate-git-dir: clarify

2014-08-05 Thread Linus Arver
On Tue, Aug 05, 2014 at 03:12:21PM -0700, Junio C Hamano wrote:
 Linus Arver linusar...@gmail.com writes:
 
  Signed-off-by: Linus Arver linusar...@gmail.com
  ---
 
 You would need to work on your justification skills ;-) in the log
 message.  What does this change clarify and in what way?

Oops, sorry. I guess I should have written some more information in the
commit message, something like this:

Use shorter sentences to describe what actually happens. We describe
what the term Git symbolic link actually means.

Also, we separate out the description of the behavioral change upon
reinitialization into its own paragraph.

   Documentation/git-init.txt | 12 ++--
   1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
 
  diff --git a/Documentation/git-init.txt b/Documentation/git-init.txt
  index f21b85b..bf0a7ae 100644
  --- a/Documentation/git-init.txt
  +++ b/Documentation/git-init.txt
  @@ -57,12 +57,12 @@ DIRECTORY section below.)
   
   --separate-git-dir=git dir::
   
  -Instead of initializing the repository where it is supposed to be,
  -place a filesytem-agnostic Git symbolic link there, pointing to the
  -specified path, and initialize a Git repository at the path. The
  -result is Git repository can be separated from working tree. If this
  -is reinitialization, the repository will be moved to the specified
  -path.
  +Separate the Git repository from your working tree.  Instead of 
  initializing the
  +repository as a directory to either `$GIT_DIR` or `./.git/`, create a text 
  file
  +there containing the path to the actual repository.  This file acts as
  +filesystem-agnostic Git symbolic link to the repository.
  ++
  +If this is reinitialization, the repository will be moved to the specified 
  path.
   
   --shared[=(false|true|umask|group|all|world|everybody|0xxx)]::
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[PATCH 4/7] Documentation: git-init: --separate-git-dir: clarify

2014-08-02 Thread Linus Arver
Signed-off-by: Linus Arver linusar...@gmail.com
---
 Documentation/git-init.txt | 12 ++--
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/git-init.txt b/Documentation/git-init.txt
index f21b85b..bf0a7ae 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-init.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-init.txt
@@ -57,12 +57,12 @@ DIRECTORY section below.)
 
 --separate-git-dir=git dir::
 
-Instead of initializing the repository where it is supposed to be,
-place a filesytem-agnostic Git symbolic link there, pointing to the
-specified path, and initialize a Git repository at the path. The
-result is Git repository can be separated from working tree. If this
-is reinitialization, the repository will be moved to the specified
-path.
+Separate the Git repository from your working tree.  Instead of initializing 
the
+repository as a directory to either `$GIT_DIR` or `./.git/`, create a text file
+there containing the path to the actual repository.  This file acts as
+filesystem-agnostic Git symbolic link to the repository.
++
+If this is reinitialization, the repository will be moved to the specified 
path.
 
 --shared[=(false|true|umask|group|all|world|everybody|0xxx)]::
 
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2.0.3

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