Re: [PATCH 7/8] Doc/git-submodule: improve readability and grammar of a sentence

[Stefan Beller]

On Sat, Jan 6, 2018 at 10:46 AM, Kaartic Sivaraam
 wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Kaartic Sivaraam 
> ---
>  Documentation/git-submodule.txt | 6 +++---
>  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/git-submodule.txt b/Documentation/git-submodule.txt
> index ff612001d..befbccde6 100644
> --- a/Documentation/git-submodule.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/git-submodule.txt
> @@ -132,9 +132,9 @@ expects by cloning missing submodules and updating the 
> working tree of
>  the submodules. The "updating" can be done in several ways depending
>  on command line options and the value of `submodule..update`
>  configuration variable. The command line option takes precedence over
> -the configuration variable. if neither is given, a checkout is performed.
> -update procedures supported both from the command line as well as setting
> -`submodule..update`:
> +the configuration variable. If neither is given, a checkout is performed.
> +The update procedures supported both from the command line as well as
> +through the `submodule..update` configuration are:

Makes sense!
Thanks,
Stefan

>
> checkout;; the commit recorded in the superproject will be
> checked out in the submodule on a detached HEAD.
> --
> 2.16.0.rc0.223.g4a4ac8367
>

[PATCH 7/8] Doc/git-submodule: improve readability and grammar of a sentence

[Kaartic Sivaraam]

Signed-off-by: Kaartic Sivaraam 
---
 Documentation/git-submodule.txt | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/git-submodule.txt b/Documentation/git-submodule.txt
index ff612001d..befbccde6 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-submodule.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-submodule.txt
@@ -132,9 +132,9 @@ expects by cloning missing submodules and updating the 
working tree of
 the submodules. The "updating" can be done in several ways depending
 on command line options and the value of `submodule..update`
 configuration variable. The command line option takes precedence over
-the configuration variable. if neither is given, a checkout is performed.
-update procedures supported both from the command line as well as setting
-`submodule..update`:
+the configuration variable. If neither is given, a checkout is performed.
+The update procedures supported both from the command line as well as
+through the `submodule..update` configuration are:
 
checkout;; the commit recorded in the superproject will be
checked out in the submodule on a detached HEAD.
-- 
2.16.0.rc0.223.g4a4ac8367