> > > > -Or you can use linkgit:git-name-rev[1], which will give the commit a > > +or you can use linkgit:git-name-rev[1], which will give the commit a > > I think this reads better with a capital 'O'. (The pedant in me > likes it, too, since a colon ends a sentence.) > > The lowercase 'but' later in this section should perhaps also be > capitalized, since it also starts an independent thought. > > But that may sometimes help you guess which tags come after the > given commit. >
I am no native speaker, but I am a little reluctant to start a new sentence with "But" or "Or". > The sentence "So, you can run something like ... then search for a > line that looks like ..." is a sequence of incomplete thoughts. It > could be paraphrased a little to scan better: > > So, if you run something like "git show-branch e05db0fd > v1.5.0-rc0 v1.5.0-rc1 v1.5.0-rc2" > > $ git show-branch e05db0fd v1.5.0-rc0 v1.5.0-rc1 v1.5.0-rc2 > ! [e05db... > > then a line like > > + ++ [e05db0fd] Fix warnings in ... > > shows that e05db0fd is reachable from itself, from v1.5.0-rc1, > and from v1.5.0-rc2, and not from v1.5.0-rc0. > OK; thanks! I will add this. > > > > -To see how submodule support works, create (for example) four example > > +To see how submodule support works, create four example > > I'd keep the joke. > I totally missed the joke ... --- Thomas -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majord...@vger.kernel.org More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html
