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On Sun, Mar 16, 2014 at 3:40 AM, David Tran <unsignedz...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Subject: Removed subshell invocations in many of the tests when possible

Use imperative mode: "remove" rather than "removed"

"many of the tests" says little and doesn't add anything useful that
is not already shown in the diffstat (below).

"when possible" is implied: no need to state it.

You might rewrite as:

  Subject: tests: set temp variables via 'env' rather than subshell

It also would be a very good idea at this point in the commit message
to explain why those subshells were used rather than the more
idiomatic "FOO=BAR command". Explain that that form leaks FOO=BAR into
the surrounding context in POSIX shells when 'command' is a shell
function. Perhaps reference this [1] email thread or some other
meaningful source.

[1]: http://thread.gmane.org/gmane.comp.version-control.git/243933/focus=243967

> I am David Tran a graduating CS/Math senior from Sonoma State University,
> United States. I would like to work with git for GSoC'14, specifically the 
> line
> options for git rebase --interactive. I have used git for a few years and know
> how destructive but important rebase is to git. I have created a few shell
> scripts here and there to make life using bash/zsh easier. I would like to
> apply these skills and work with the best.
>
> I've submitted my application yesterday and my patch didn't send correctly.

This email commentary should be placed below the "---" line following
your sign-off. It would not make sense as part of the actual commit
message. (Think about someone reading the commit message months or
years from now.)

The patch itself has some problems. See comments below.

> Signed-off-by: David Tran <unsignedz...@gmail.com>
> ---
>  t/t1300-repo-config.sh        |   17 +++---------
>  t/t1510-repo-setup.sh         |    4 +--
>  t/t3200-branch.sh             |   12 +-------
>  t/t3301-notes.sh              |   24 ++++++------------
>  t/t3404-rebase-interactive.sh |   55 
> +++++++++--------------------------------
>  t/t3413-rebase-hook.sh        |    6 +---
>  t/t4014-format-patch.sh       |   14 ++--------
>  t/t5305-include-tag.sh        |    4 +--
>  t/t5602-clone-remote-exec.sh  |   13 ++-------
>  t/t5801-remote-helpers.sh     |    6 +---
>  t/t6006-rev-list-format.sh    |    3 +-
>  t/t7006-pager.sh              |   18 ++-----------
>  12 files changed, 41 insertions(+), 135 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/t/t1300-repo-config.sh b/t/t1300-repo-config.sh
> index c9c426c..3e3f77b 100755
> --- a/t/t1300-repo-config.sh
> +++ b/t/t1300-repo-config.sh
> @@ -974,24 +974,15 @@ test_expect_success SYMLINKS 'symlinked configuration' '
>  '
>
>  test_expect_success 'nonexistent configuration' '
> -       (
> -               GIT_CONFIG=doesnotexist &&
> -               export GIT_CONFIG &&
> -               test_must_fail git config --list &&
> -               test_must_fail git config test.xyzzy
> -       )
> +       test_must_fail env GIT_CONFIG=doesnotexist git config --list &&
> +       test_must_fail env GIT_CONFIG=doesnotexist git config test.xyzzy
>  '
>
>  test_expect_success SYMLINKS 'symlink to nonexistent configuration' '
>         ln -s doesnotexist linktonada &&
>         ln -s linktonada linktolinktonada &&
> -       (
> -               GIT_CONFIG=linktonada &&
> -               export GIT_CONFIG &&
> -               test_must_fail git config --list &&
> -               GIT_CONFIG=linktolinktonada &&
> -               test_must_fail git config --list
> -       )
> +       test_must_fail env GIT_CONFIG=linktonada git config --list &&
> +       test_must_fail env GIT_CONFIG=linktolinktonada git config --list
>  '
>
>  test_expect_success 'check split_cmdline return' "
> diff --git a/t/t1510-repo-setup.sh b/t/t1510-repo-setup.sh
> index cf2ee78..d8025be 100755
> --- a/t/t1510-repo-setup.sh
> +++ b/t/t1510-repo-setup.sh
> @@ -777,9 +777,7 @@ test_expect_success '#30: core.worktree and core.bare 
> conflict (gitfile version)
>         setup_repo 30 "$here/30" gitfile true &&
>         (
>                 cd 30 &&
> -               GIT_DIR=.git &&
> -               export GIT_DIR &&
> -               test_must_fail git symbolic-ref HEAD 2>result
> +               test_must_fail env GIT_DIR='.git' git symbolic-ref HEAD 
> 2>result

Why quote GIT_DIR='.git' when it wasn't quoted in the original? Also,
note that this entire test code is inside single quotes already.

>         ) &&
>         grep "core.bare and core.worktree" 30/result
>  '
> diff --git a/t/t3200-branch.sh b/t/t3200-branch.sh
> index fcdb867..d45e95c 100755
> --- a/t/t3200-branch.sh
> +++ b/t/t3200-branch.sh
> @@ -849,11 +849,7 @@ test_expect_success 'detect typo in branch name when 
> using --edit-description' '
>         write_script editor <<-\EOF &&
>                 echo "New contents" >"$1"
>         EOF
> -       (
> -               EDITOR=./editor &&
> -               export EDITOR &&
> -               test_must_fail git branch --edit-description no-such-branch
> -       )
> +       test_must_fail env EDITOR=./editor git branch --edit-description 
> no-such-branch
>  '
>
>  test_expect_success 'refuse --edit-description on unborn branch for now' '
> @@ -861,11 +857,7 @@ test_expect_success 'refuse --edit-description on unborn 
> branch for now' '
>                 echo "New contents" >"$1"
>         EOF
>         git checkout --orphan unborn &&
> -       (
> -               EDITOR=./editor &&
> -               export EDITOR &&
> -               test_must_fail git branch --edit-description
> -       )
> +       test_must_fail env EDITOR=./editor git branch --edit-description
>  '
>
>  test_expect_success '--merged catches invalid object names' '
> diff --git a/t/t3301-notes.sh b/t/t3301-notes.sh
> index 3bb79a4..ca1fea9 100755
> --- a/t/t3301-notes.sh
> +++ b/t/t3301-notes.sh
> @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ GIT_EDITOR=./fake_editor.sh
>  export GIT_EDITOR
>
>  test_expect_success 'cannot annotate non-existing HEAD' '
> -       (MSG=3 && export MSG && test_must_fail git notes add)
> +       test_must_fail env MSG=3 git notes add
>  '
>
>  test_expect_success setup '
> @@ -32,22 +32,18 @@ test_expect_success setup '
>  '
>
>  test_expect_success 'need valid notes ref' '
> -       (MSG=1 GIT_NOTES_REF=/ && export MSG GIT_NOTES_REF &&
> -        test_must_fail git notes add) &&
> -       (MSG=2 GIT_NOTES_REF=/ && export MSG GIT_NOTES_REF &&
> -        test_must_fail git notes show)
> +       test_must_fail env MSG=1 env GIT_NOTES_REF=/ git notes show &&
> +       test_must_fail env MSG=2 env GIT_NOTES_REF=/ git notes show

A single env invocation accepts multiple VAR=VAL arguments, so it
should not be necessary to make env invoke env in order to set
multiple arguments. The same comment applies to all other such
instances below this point.

>  '
>
>  test_expect_success 'refusing to add notes in refs/heads/' '
> -       (MSG=1 GIT_NOTES_REF=refs/heads/bogus &&
> -        export MSG GIT_NOTES_REF &&
> -        test_must_fail git notes add)
> +       test_must_fail env MSG=1 env GIT_NOTES_REF=refs/heads/bogus \
> +        git notes add
>  '
>
>  test_expect_success 'refusing to edit notes in refs/remotes/' '
> -       (MSG=1 GIT_NOTES_REF=refs/remotes/bogus &&
> -        export MSG GIT_NOTES_REF &&
> -        test_must_fail git notes edit)
> +       test_must_fail env MSG=1 env GIT_NOTES_REF=refs/heads/bogus \
> +        git notes edit
>  '
>
>  # 1 indicates caught gracefully by die, 128 means git-show barked
> @@ -865,11 +861,7 @@ test_expect_success 'create note from non-existing note 
> with "git notes add -c"
>         git add a10 &&
>         test_tick &&
>         git commit -m 10th &&
> -       (
> -               MSG="yet another note" &&
> -               export MSG &&
> -               test_must_fail git notes add -c deadbeef
> -       ) &&
> +       test_must_fail env MSG="yet another note" git notes add -c deadbeef

Broken &&-chain.

>         test_must_fail git notes list HEAD
>  '
>
> diff --git a/t/t3404-rebase-interactive.sh b/t/t3404-rebase-interactive.sh
> index 50e22b1..842a47a 100755
> --- a/t/t3404-rebase-interactive.sh
> +++ b/t/t3404-rebase-interactive.sh
> @@ -104,9 +104,7 @@ test_expect_success 'rebase -i with the exec command 
> checks tree cleanness' '
>         git checkout master &&
>         (
>         set_fake_editor &&
> -       FAKE_LINES="exec_echo_foo_>file1 1" &&
> -       export FAKE_LINES &&
> -       test_must_fail git rebase -i HEAD^
> +       test_must_fail env FAKE_LINES="exec_echo_foo_>file1 1" git rebase -i 
> HEAD^
>         ) &&
>         test_cmp_rev master^ HEAD &&
>         git reset --hard &&
> @@ -118,9 +116,8 @@ test_expect_success 'rebase -i with exec of inexistent 
> command' '
>         test_when_finished "git rebase --abort" &&
>         (
>         set_fake_editor &&
> -       FAKE_LINES="exec_this-command-does-not-exist 1" &&
> -       export FAKE_LINES &&
> -       test_must_fail git rebase -i HEAD^ >actual 2>&1
> +       test_must_fail env FAKE_LINES="exec_this-command-does-not-exist 1" \
> +       git rebase -i HEAD^ >actual 2>&1
>         ) &&
>         ! grep "Maybe git-rebase is broken" actual
>  '
> @@ -375,11 +372,7 @@ test_expect_success 'commit message used after conflict' 
> '
>         git checkout -b conflict-fixup conflict-branch &&
>         base=$(git rev-parse HEAD~4) &&
>         set_fake_editor &&
> -       (
> -               FAKE_LINES="1 fixup 3 fixup 4" &&
> -               export FAKE_LINES &&
> -               test_must_fail git rebase -i $base
> -       ) &&
> +       test_must_fail env FAKE_LINES="1 fixup 3 fixup 4" git rebase -i $base 
> &&
>         echo three > conflict &&
>         git add conflict &&
>         FAKE_COMMIT_AMEND="ONCE" EXPECT_HEADER_COUNT=2 \
> @@ -394,11 +387,7 @@ test_expect_success 'commit message retained after 
> conflict' '
>         git checkout -b conflict-squash conflict-branch &&
>         base=$(git rev-parse HEAD~4) &&
>         set_fake_editor &&
> -       (
> -               FAKE_LINES="1 fixup 3 squash 4" &&
> -               export FAKE_LINES &&
> -               test_must_fail git rebase -i $base
> -       ) &&
> +       test_must_fail env FAKE_LINES="1 fixup 3 squash 4" git rebase -i 
> $base &&
>         echo three > conflict &&
>         git add conflict &&
>         FAKE_COMMIT_AMEND="TWICE" EXPECT_HEADER_COUNT=2 \
> @@ -469,11 +458,7 @@ test_expect_success 'interrupted squash works as 
> expected' '
>         git checkout -b interrupted-squash conflict-branch &&
>         one=$(git rev-parse HEAD~3) &&
>         set_fake_editor &&
> -       (
> -               FAKE_LINES="1 squash 3 2" &&
> -               export FAKE_LINES &&
> -               test_must_fail git rebase -i HEAD~3
> -       ) &&
> +       test_must_fail env FAKE_LINES="1 squash 3 2" git rebase -i HEAD~3 &&
>         (echo one; echo two; echo four) > conflict &&
>         git add conflict &&
>         test_must_fail git rebase --continue &&
> @@ -487,11 +472,7 @@ test_expect_success 'interrupted squash works as 
> expected (case 2)' '
>         git checkout -b interrupted-squash2 conflict-branch &&
>         one=$(git rev-parse HEAD~3) &&
>         set_fake_editor &&
> -       (
> -               FAKE_LINES="3 squash 1 2" &&
> -               export FAKE_LINES &&
> -               test_must_fail git rebase -i HEAD~3
> -       ) &&
> +       test_must_fail env FAKE_LINES="3 squash 1 2" git rebase -i HEAD~3 &&
>         (echo one; echo four) > conflict &&
>         git add conflict &&
>         test_must_fail git rebase --continue &&
> @@ -529,9 +510,7 @@ test_expect_success 'aborted --continue does not squash 
> commits after "edit"' '
>         echo "edited again" > file7 &&
>         git add file7 &&
>         (
> -               FAKE_COMMIT_MESSAGE=" " &&
> -               export FAKE_COMMIT_MESSAGE &&
> -               test_must_fail git rebase --continue
> +               test_must_fail env FAKE_COMMIT_MESSAGE=" " git rebase 
> --continue
>         ) &&

Don't you want to get rid of the subshell here?

>         test $old = $(git rev-parse HEAD) &&
>         git rebase --abort
> @@ -548,9 +527,7 @@ test_expect_success 'auto-amend only edited commits after 
> "edit"' '
>         git add file7 &&
>         test_tick &&
>         (
> -               FAKE_COMMIT_MESSAGE="and again" &&
> -               export FAKE_COMMIT_MESSAGE &&
> -               test_must_fail git rebase --continue
> +               test_must_fail env FAKE_COMMIT_MESSAGE="and again" git rebase 
> --continue
>         ) &&

And here?

>         git rebase --abort
>  '
> @@ -560,9 +537,7 @@ test_expect_success 'clean error after failed "exec"' '
>         test_when_finished "git rebase --abort || :" &&
>         set_fake_editor &&
>         (
> -               FAKE_LINES="1 exec_false" &&
> -               export FAKE_LINES &&
> -               test_must_fail git rebase -i HEAD^
> +               test_must_fail env FAKE_LINES="1 exec_false" git rebase -i 
> HEAD^
>         ) &&

And here?

>         echo "edited again" > file7 &&
>         git add file7 &&
> @@ -949,9 +924,7 @@ test_expect_success 'rebase -i --root temporary sentinel 
> commit' '
>         git checkout B &&
>         (
>                 set_fake_editor &&
> -               FAKE_LINES="2" &&
> -               export FAKE_LINES &&
> -               test_must_fail git rebase -i --root
> +               test_must_fail env FAKE_LINES="2" git rebase -i --root
>         ) &&

And maybe here (or does this test or later tests break if
set_fake_editor is taken out of the subshell)?

>         git cat-file commit HEAD | grep "^tree 4b825dc642cb" &&
>         git rebase --abort
> @@ -1042,11 +1015,7 @@ test_expect_success 'rebase -i error on commits with \ 
> in message' '
>         test_when_finished "git rebase --abort; git reset --hard 
> $current_head; rm -f error" &&
>         test_commit TO-REMOVE will-conflict old-content &&
>         test_commit "\temp" will-conflict new-content dummy &&
> -       (
> -       EDITOR=true &&
> -       export EDITOR &&
> -       test_must_fail git rebase -i HEAD^ --onto HEAD^^ 2>error
> -       ) &&
> +       test_must_fail env EDITOR=true git rebase -i HEAD^ --onto HEAD^^ 
> 2>error

Broken &&-chain.

>         test_expect_code 1 grep  "      emp" error
>  '
>
> diff --git a/t/t3413-rebase-hook.sh b/t/t3413-rebase-hook.sh
> index 098b755..33560a1 100755
> --- a/t/t3413-rebase-hook.sh
> +++ b/t/t3413-rebase-hook.sh
> @@ -118,11 +118,7 @@ test_expect_success 'pre-rebase hook stops rebase (1)' '
>  test_expect_success 'pre-rebase hook stops rebase (2)' '
>         git checkout test &&
>         git reset --hard side &&
> -       (
> -               EDITOR=:
> -               export EDITOR
> -               test_must_fail git rebase -i master
> -       ) &&
> +       test_must_fail env EDITOR=: git rebase -i master

Broken &&-chain.

>         test "z$(git symbolic-ref HEAD)" = zrefs/heads/test &&
>         test 0 = $(git rev-list HEAD...side | wc -l)
>  '
> diff --git a/t/t4014-format-patch.sh b/t/t4014-format-patch.sh
> index 73194b2..4a4b943 100755
> --- a/t/t4014-format-patch.sh
> +++ b/t/t4014-format-patch.sh
> @@ -764,22 +764,14 @@ test_expect_success 'format-patch --signature="" 
> suppresses signatures' '
>
>  test_expect_success TTY 'format-patch --stdout paginates' '
>         rm -f pager_used &&
> -       (
> -               GIT_PAGER="wc >pager_used" &&
> -               export GIT_PAGER &&
> -               test_terminal git format-patch --stdout --all
> -       ) &&
> +       test_terminal env GIT_PAGER="wc >pager_used" git format-patch 
> --stdout --all

Broken &&-chain.

>         test_path_is_file pager_used
>  '
>
>   test_expect_success TTY 'format-patch --stdout pagination can be disabled' '
>         rm -f pager_used &&
> -       (
> -               GIT_PAGER="wc >pager_used" &&
> -               export GIT_PAGER &&
> -               test_terminal git --no-pager format-patch --stdout --all &&
> -               test_terminal git -c "pager.format-patch=false" format-patch 
> --stdout --all
> -       ) &&
> +       test_terminal env GIT_PAGER="wc >pager_used" git --no-pager 
> format-patch --stdout --all &&
> +       test_terminal env GIT_PAGER="wc >pager_used" git -c 
> "pager.format-patch=false" format-patch --stdout --all

Broken &&-chain.

>         test_path_is_missing pager_used &&
>         test_path_is_missing .git/pager_used
>  '
> diff --git a/t/t5305-include-tag.sh b/t/t5305-include-tag.sh
> index b061864..21517c7 100755
> --- a/t/t5305-include-tag.sh
> +++ b/t/t5305-include-tag.sh
> @@ -45,9 +45,7 @@ test_expect_success 'unpack objects' '
>  test_expect_success 'check unpacked result (have commit, no tag)' '
>         git rev-list --objects $commit >list.expect &&
>         (
> -               GIT_DIR=clone.git &&
> -               export GIT_DIR &&
> -               test_must_fail git cat-file -e $tag &&
> +               test_must_fail env GIT_DIR=clone.git git cat-file -e $tag &&
>                 git rev-list --objects $commit
>         ) >list.actual &&
>         test_cmp list.expect list.actual
> diff --git a/t/t5602-clone-remote-exec.sh b/t/t5602-clone-remote-exec.sh
> index 3f353d9..70ab206 100755
> --- a/t/t5602-clone-remote-exec.sh
> +++ b/t/t5602-clone-remote-exec.sh
> @@ -12,21 +12,14 @@ test_expect_success setup '
>  '
>
>  test_expect_success 'clone calls git upload-pack unqualified with no -u 
> option' '
> -       (
> -               GIT_SSH=./not_ssh &&
> -               export GIT_SSH &&
> -               test_must_fail git clone localhost:/path/to/repo junk
> -       ) &&
> +       test_must_fail env GIT_SSH=./not_ssh git clone 
> localhost:/path/to/repo junk

Broken &&-chain.

>         echo "localhost git-upload-pack '\''/path/to/repo'\''" >expected &&
>         test_cmp expected not_ssh_output
>  '
>
>  test_expect_success 'clone calls specified git upload-pack with -u option' '
> -       (
> -               GIT_SSH=./not_ssh &&
> -               export GIT_SSH &&
> -               test_must_fail git clone -u ./something/bin/git-upload-pack 
> localhost:/path/to/repo junk
> -       ) &&
> +       test_must_fail env GIT_SSH=./not_ssh \
> +        git clone -u ./something/bin/git-upload-pack localhost:/path/to/repo 
> junk

Broken &&-chain.

Strange indentation on the continuation line. Indent with tab.

>         echo "localhost ./something/bin/git-upload-pack 
> '\''/path/to/repo'\''" >expected &&
>         test_cmp expected not_ssh_output
>  '
> diff --git a/t/t5801-remote-helpers.sh b/t/t5801-remote-helpers.sh
> index 613f69a..ca19838 100755
> --- a/t/t5801-remote-helpers.sh
> +++ b/t/t5801-remote-helpers.sh
> @@ -218,10 +218,8 @@ test_expect_success 'proper failure checks for fetching' 
> '
>  '
>
>  test_expect_success 'proper failure checks for pushing' '
> -       (GIT_REMOTE_TESTGIT_FAILURE=1 &&
> -       export GIT_REMOTE_TESTGIT_FAILURE &&
> -       cd local &&
> -       test_must_fail git push --all
> +       (cd local &&
> +       test_must_fail env GIT_REMOTE_TESTGIT_FAILURE=1 git push --all
>         )
>  '
>
> diff --git a/t/t6006-rev-list-format.sh b/t/t6006-rev-list-format.sh
> index 9874403..b43fb67 100755
> --- a/t/t6006-rev-list-format.sh
> +++ b/t/t6006-rev-list-format.sh
> @@ -191,8 +191,7 @@ test_expect_success '%C(auto) respects --no-color' '
>
>  test_expect_success TTY '%C(auto) respects --color=auto (stdout is tty)' '
>         (
> -               TERM=vt100 && export TERM &&
> -               test_terminal \
> +               test_terminal env TERM=vt100 \
>                         git log --format=$AUTO_COLOR -1 --color=auto >actual 
> &&
>                 has_color actual
>         )

Is this subshell still necessary? Does has_color rely upon the value of TERM?

> diff --git a/t/t7006-pager.sh b/t/t7006-pager.sh
> index b9365b4..8748ace 100755
> --- a/t/t7006-pager.sh
> +++ b/t/t7006-pager.sh
> @@ -146,11 +146,7 @@ test_expect_success 'no color when stdout is a regular 
> file' '
>  test_expect_success TTY 'color when writing to a pager' '
>         rm -f paginated.out &&
>         test_config color.ui auto &&
> -       (
> -               TERM=vt100 &&
> -               export TERM &&
> -               test_terminal git log
> -       ) &&
> +       test_terminal env TERM=vt100 git log &&
>         colorful paginated.out
>  '
>
> @@ -158,11 +154,7 @@ test_expect_success TTY 'colors are suppressed by 
> color.pager' '
>         rm -f paginated.out &&
>         test_config color.ui auto &&
>         test_config color.pager false &&
> -       (
> -               TERM=vt100 &&
> -               export TERM &&
> -               test_terminal git log
> -       ) &&
> +       test_terminal env TERM=vt100 git log

Broken &&-chain.

>         ! colorful paginated.out
>  '
>
> @@ -181,11 +173,7 @@ test_expect_success 'color when writing to a file 
> intended for a pager' '
>  test_expect_success TTY 'colors are sent to pager for external commands' '
>         test_config alias.externallog "!git log" &&
>         test_config color.ui auto &&
> -       (
> -               TERM=vt100 &&
> -               export TERM &&
> -               test_terminal git -p externallog
> -       ) &&
> +       test_terminal env TERM=vt100 git -p externallog

Broken &&-chain.

>         colorful paginated.out
>  '
>
> --
> 1.7.9
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