Hi David,
I am stepping in and helping the authors to finish the draft as agreed
with the authors and HIP WG chair. I am not actively working on the
topic, so I have very limited time for this but I have earlier
background in HIP. Please let me know if the following comments and
edits address
Reviewer: David Waltermire
Review result: Has Issues
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
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