r. Jaehoon Paul Jeong [mailto:jaehoon.p...@gmail.com]
>> > Sent: Tuesday, June 18, 2019 5:15 AM
>> > To: Roman Danyliw
>> > Cc: Linda Dunbar ; Yoav Nir <
>> ynir.i...@gmail.com>;
>> > i2nsf@ietf.org; skku_secu-brain_...@googlegroups.com;
>> >
r. Jaehoon Paul Jeong mailto:jaehoon.p...@gmail.com>>
> Subject: Re: [I2nsf] AD Review: draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-09
>
> Hi Roman,
> I have addressed all of your comments again and submitted version -12:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-12
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> > Sent: Tuesday, June 18, 2019 5:15 AM
> > To: Roman Danyliw
> > Cc: Linda Dunbar ; Yoav Nir <
> ynir.i...@gmail.com>;
> > i2nsf@ietf.org; skku_secu-brain_...@googlegroups.com;
> > Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
> > Subject: Re: [I2nsf] AD Review: draft-
; Jeong
> > Sent: Thursday, May 02, 2019 5:13 AM
> > To: Roman Danyliw ; Linda Dunbar
> > ; Yoav Nir
> > Cc: i2nsf@ietf.org; skku_secu-brain_...@googlegroups.com
> > Subject: Re: [I2nsf] AD Review: draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-09
> >
> > Hi Roman, Linda,
rom: I2nsf [mailto:i2nsf-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Mr. Jaehoon Paul
> Jeong
> Sent: Thursday, May 02, 2019 5:13 AM
> To: Roman Danyliw ; Linda Dunbar
> ; Yoav Nir
> Cc: i2nsf@ietf.org; skku_secu-brain_...@googlegroups.com
> Subject: Re: [I2nsf] AD Review: draft-ietf-i2nsf-app
Review: draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-09
Hi Roman, Linda, and Yoav,
I have reflected Roman's questions and comments
in I2NSF Applicability Draft (version 10).
Here is the link of the revised draft:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-10
I send you my revision letter
Hi!
I'm picking up where ekr left off
(https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/i2nsf/bVTGfSXR70UcFkwfkV4FsNHg8uo) with
an AD review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-09.
(1) Section 1. Please do not expand NSF again the second sentence. The
acronym NSF was defined in the first sentence.
(2)
