Re: [i2rs] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-12

Hi Mahesh, Please see NB> below for comments to how I’m looking to address your concerns. Section 2. Figure 2 shows the RIB model. By putting it where it is, I would have expected that all the elements of the diagram would be explained in that section. One has to read section

Re: [i2rs] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-12

Hi Mahesh, Thanks for taking an initial stab at it. I’ll work on adding these clarifications and rev the draft. Improving readability is definitely important! On 1/12/18, 7:30 AM, "i2rs on behalf of Mahesh Jethanandani" wrote:

[i2rs] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-12

Reviewer: Mahesh Jethanandani Review result: Not Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate’s ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF