On Wed, May 20, 2015 at 2:52 PM, Sean DALY wrote:
> Thanks Peter, I was watching that too.
>
> If I understand correctly switching/changing the sections or adding an
> Activity is beyond tweaks? while text changes are tweaks.
We need to stop somewhere and say "Yes, this is good enough" and I
real
Thanks Peter, I was watching that too.
If I understand correctly switching/changing the sections or adding an
Activity is beyond tweaks? while text changes are tweaks.
I'm quite happy with it, even though there are lots of changes we suggested
which aren't in.
I feel the only tweak still to make
>>>
>>> _Please_consolidate_the_changes_before_send_to_Peter_.
>>>
>> Thanks, Gonzalo, is good advice.
>>
>
> I've just spent two hours manually providing updates. It will be live
> on staging shortly.
>
> Please provide any further updates against that.
Right the new updated content is live on st
On Wed, May 20, 2015 at 10:33 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
wrote:
> On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 11:39 -0300, Gonzalo Odiard wrote:
>> Iain, Sean, Sam,
>>
>>
>> _Please_consolidate_the_changes_before_send_to_Peter_.
>>
> Thanks, Gonzalo, is good advice.
>
I've just spent two hours manually providing updates.
On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 11:39 -0300, Gonzalo Odiard wrote:
> Iain, Sean, Sam,
>
>
> _Please_consolidate_the_changes_before_send_to_Peter_.
>
Thanks, Gonzalo, is good advice.
My apologies to the other contributors, Sam, Walter and Sean for
clouding their perfectly useful work.
The text that I hav
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 8:01 PM, Sean DALY wrote:
> Peter - here is Iain's document:
>
> http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/marketing/attachments/20150519/bdaf00ca/attachment.html
Can we have pure plain text, the web team deals with formatting.
I need to be able to provide it in pure text, I don
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 8:33 PM, Iain Brown Douglas
wrote:
> On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 19:57 +0200, Sean DALY wrote:
>> Gonzalo - Iain had already consolidated all changes
>
> ... almost consolidated!
>
> Chat does not really fit in Multimedia, IMHO.
It's not in Multimedia, it's in "Going online". Ma
On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 19:57 +0200, Sean DALY wrote:
> Gonzalo - Iain had already consolidated all changes
... almost consolidated!
Chat does not really fit in Multimedia, IMHO.
Iain
> but Peter doesn't want to deal with a text file.
>
> Sean
>
>
>
> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 4:39 PM, Gonzalo
Peter - here is Iain's document:
http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/marketing/attachments/20150519/bdaf00ca/attachment.html
Sean
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 7:57 PM, Sean DALY wrote:
> Gonzalo - Iain had already consolidated all changes but Peter doesn't want
> to deal with a text file.
> Sean
>
Gonzalo - Iain had already consolidated all changes but Peter doesn't want
to deal with a text file.
Sean
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 4:39 PM, Gonzalo Odiard
wrote:
> Iain, Sean, Sam,
>
> _Please_consolidate_the_changes_before_send_to_Peter_.
>
> Peter,
> when need this be finished?
>
> Gonzalo
>
>
Iain, Sean, Sam,
_Please_consolidate_the_changes_before_send_to_Peter_.
Peter,
when need this be finished?
Gonzalo
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 11:34 AM, Peter Robinson
wrote:
> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 3:16 PM, Iain Brown Douglas
> wrote:
> > On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 15:00 +0100, Peter Robinson wro
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 3:16 PM, Iain Brown Douglas
wrote:
> On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 15:00 +0100, Peter Robinson wrote:
>> >> > Hi Peter,
>> >> >
>> >> > On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson
>> >> > wrote:
>> >> >>
>> >> >> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
>> >> >> wr
On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 15:00 +0100, Peter Robinson wrote:
> >> > Hi Peter,
> >> >
> >> > On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson
> >> > wrote:
> >> >>
> >> >> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
> >> >> wrote:
> >> >> > Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
> >> >> >
>> > Hi Peter,
>> >
>> > On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson
>> > wrote:
>> >>
>> >> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
>> >> wrote:
>> >> > Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
>> >> >
>> >> > Fair copy attached.
>> >> >
>> >> > I originally included the sect
On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 13:30 +0100, Peter Robinson wrote:
> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 12:37 PM, Sam P. wrote:
> > Hi Peter,
> >
> > On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson wrote:
> >>
> >> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
> >> wrote:
> >> > Thanks, Sean, for the careful pr
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 12:37 PM, Sam P. wrote:
> Hi Peter,
>
> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson wrote:
>>
>> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
>> wrote:
>> > Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
>> >
>> > Fair copy attached.
>> >
>> > I originally include
Hi Peter,
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson wrote:
> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
> wrote:
> > Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
> >
> > Fair copy attached.
> >
> > I originally included the section "Multimedia", as it is the set of
> > Activities
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
wrote:
> Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
>
> Fair copy attached.
>
> I originally included the section "Multimedia", as it is the set of
> Activities in http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/
> but not in the Walter/Sam contribu
Many thanks Iain
Fine with me to delete Multimedia section. I feel the existing intro plus
the Activities descriptions will fulfill the role of encouraging the
visitor to download and try SoaS. Walter, Sam, OK with you?
Sean
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 6:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas <
i...@browndougla
Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
Fair copy attached.
I originally included the section "Multimedia", as it is the set of
Activities in http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/
but not in the Walter/Sam contribution.
I think it is the weakest section. Chat jars a bit on the page, a
thanks Iain looks good
some typos:
Wwork -> Work
FotoToon -> OK is singular not plural
speech and though -> speech and thought
Paint provides to tools -> Paint provides tools
Make Sugar activities -> Make Sugar Activities / edit existing activities
-> edit existing Activities / Browse activity ->
On Sun, 2015-05-17 at 15:14 +0200, Sean DALY wrote:
> Peter - Walter's edits were for the Activities descriptions, mine were
> for the introduction, no reconciliation necessary
>
>
> Sean
>
>
>
> On Sat, May 16, 2015 at 12:38 PM, Peter Robinson
> wrote:
> Walter sent some edits, I bel
This looks very good. Well done all!
On Wed, May 13, 2015 at 03:56:22PM +0100, Peter Robinson wrote:
> Hi Sam, Gonzalo et el,
>
> I've worked with the Fedora web team to update it some based partially
> on Sam's details below.
>
> Details are here:
> http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/
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